My Beautiful First Love With Lily
My Beautiful First Love With Lily follows the budding romance of Liam, a high school student, and Lily, a beautiful and enigmatic girl. Filled with laughter, sarcastic banter, and unexpected twists, their relationship deepens, revealing secrets and mysteries that add suspense to their blossoming love story. Liam navigates the ups and downs of first love, facing comedic misunderstandings, heartfelt confessions, and the occasional sarcastic remark from Lily. But beneath the surface lies a web of secrets and hidden truths surrounding Lily's past. As Liam and Lily grow closer, they uncover these mysteries, leading them on a thrilling journey of self-discovery and love. Will their love survive the tests of time and the weight of hidden truths? Find out in My Beautiful First Love With Lily, a captivating blend of romance, comedy, suspense, and mystery.
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Good start to the story😑 Average Pacing💔
Romance Mystery And A Good Balance of Suspense and Sorrow!
Finest Piece! The Level Of Mystery Suspense, Humor and sorrow is good💝
Wow. So You Can Also Wright Love Stories😶🌫️ Niceeee✨
This Is The Second One You Published I See! Good Work! Work on Story Development and Improve a Bit on Your Writing... You Might Have It In Your Self💝
What I see is your writing quality is really good! At least better then others who keep writing the same thing over 100+ chapters. I read a few chapters. I think you could do well with the pacing of the story. But still to me it's a 5/5★! good luck man!