The Primarch of Liberty

The problem of this story is that the author doesn't know the source material. He doesn't know that there was no inquisition in the 30 millennium. That's not all but the most glaring one. Basically, he knows a bit about Warhammer 40k and tries to write a story about 30k without knowing that 30k pre heresy and 40k are vastly different.

More Warhammer is always appreciated. Now how in sweet baby liberty are you gonna pull this off

America in warhammer 30k bruh....America in warhammer 30k bruh....America in warhammer 30k bruh...America in warhammer 30k bruh....America in warhammer 30k bruh...America in warhammer 30k bruh....America in warhammer 30k bruh......

Overall not a bad fanfic for how it is written but the number of libertys it takes borders between gary sue and shameless how right everything goes for the mc, but for all this it is still well written I just wouldn't recommend it to anyone that cares about natural development or consistency with the canon version. I am not going to keep reading but I don't regret reading the first 18 chapter this just is not my cup of tea.

Freedom and democracy are strong in this one. Just please don‘t drop it, I‘m begging you.

Asmodai!" "INTERROGATE?!" "Our assumptions are confirmed!" "WHAT" "He has written a suspicious book!" "BOOK" "He's in cahoots with the Fallen!" "FALLEN" "Make him repent!" "Repeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeennnnnttttttt

you had me at liberty. god speed Author 🫡

A Gary Sue done right, while others may dislike this fanfiction for it's obvious power scaling and almost lack of struggle, understand that if you look at this fanfiction as an extension of the canon then you've come to the wrong place. This fanfic is not the dark grim future of 40k, but a humourous take on what 30k can entail. It doesn't follow the typical themes of tragedy and horror. It has it's moment and if you're willing to see it through take a chance to read it. It can be slightly awkward at times but It's 4.8/5 in my book.

I have to say, this is a gem. For the emperor 🙌

the best Warhammer fanfic I've read so far

This is not the Warhammer 40000 we wanted but we actually wanted. Plenty of humour and war crimes

Author, this is warhammer 40k fanfic peak 🔥💯

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Overall it's a good story One of the flaws is that the author doesn't know the warhammer lore that well so author sometimes makes a mistake the biggest one is probably inquisition existing in 30k I haven't seen any major plotholes The first 9 chapters were annoying and boring to read but after that it got better The story is funny and some of it moments made me genuinely laugh I 'm giving it 5 stars because more warhammer content is always good and it's a high quality for a warhammer fic