this I hands down one of the best smut novel I have read. great writing style and the characters descriptions are amazing, sadly I just do not like MC getting cucked so I have to drop. But great work by the way!
4 months ago
19
aftan203
I absolutely hate the way the story goes it would have been ten times better without the ntr
4 months ago
13
Campione_p
I'm not a fan of NTR at all but if the rest of the story hurts it it hurts it a little, the author's way of writing is very good, speaking of the erotic answer, if you don't like NTR don't even watch this 3 stars for the good scenes , the ntr and the story that in general the non-erotic is quite bad
6 months ago
12
kai_0796
Just drop the Ntr and this book will be a 5 star masterpiece better than even all your other books .As You've seen in the reviews of almost if not everyone Ntr is the only thing ruining this book
3 months ago
7
shyfix291
don't drop author....[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This heaven like novel deserves to go on. Keep updating it, author-nim. I love your works, so keep it up.
8 days ago
0
pipinggunnut
Reveal Spoiler
a month ago
0
Daoist1LQ3Kf
Esta muy bueno esto siiiiíiiíiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiií iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii. alfin un buen netorare csrajo xðdddðddddddddddddddddddddddddddddfdddddddddddddddd
3 months ago
0
9012p
hello, Can you review this book----------------------------------------------------------------THE PART OF NO RETURN : FIRST HUMAN EMPIRE------------------------------ Please
this I hands down one of the best smut novel I have read. great writing style and the characters descriptions are amazing, sadly I just do not like MC getting cucked so I have to drop. But great work by the way!
I absolutely hate the way the story goes it would have been ten times better without the ntr
I'm not a fan of NTR at all but if the rest of the story hurts it it hurts it a little, the author's way of writing is very good, speaking of the erotic answer, if you don't like NTR don't even watch this 3 stars for the good scenes , the ntr and the story that in general the non-erotic is quite bad
Just drop the Ntr and this book will be a 5 star masterpiece better than even all your other books .As You've seen in the reviews of almost if not everyone Ntr is the only thing ruining this book
don't drop author....[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
More[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I haven’t read it yet but does the mc get ntr or does he ntr other people?
this story is much better then the other one you are posting
I feel the Ntr in this isn’t needed tbh , almost like there’s no reason why there should be Ntr at all. Would there be a redemption arc later?
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=strong][img=gift][img=thinking][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=nervous][img=disgusted][img=proud][img=gift][img=angry][img=angry][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This heaven like novel deserves to go on. Keep updating it, author-nim. I love your works, so keep it up.
Reveal Spoiler
Esta muy bueno esto siiiiíiiíiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiií iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii. alfin un buen netorare csrajo xðdddðddddddddddddddddddddddddddddfdddddddddddddddd
hello, Can you review this book----------------------------------------------------------------THE PART OF NO RETURN : FIRST HUMAN EMPIRE------------------------------ Please
This novel is tagged harem right?. Right?