this I hands down one of the best smut novel I have read. great writing style and the characters descriptions are amazing, sadly I just do not like MC getting cucked so I have to drop. But great work by the way!
9 months ago
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aftan203
I absolutely hate the way the story goes it would have been ten times better without the ntr
9 months ago
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Campione_p
I'm not a fan of NTR at all but if the rest of the story hurts it it hurts it a little, the author's way of writing is very good, speaking of the erotic answer, if you don't like NTR don't even watch this 3 stars for the good scenes , the ntr and the story that in general the non-erotic is quite bad
a year ago
15
kai_0796
Just drop the Ntr and this book will be a 5 star masterpiece better than even all your other books .As You've seen in the reviews of almost if not everyone Ntr is the only thing ruining this book
8 months ago
11
shyfix291
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a year ago
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jay_solanki_0608
this story is much better then the other one you are posting
6 months ago
2
davemann_S1lver
I feel the Ntr in this isn’t needed tbh , almost like there’s no reason why there should be Ntr at all.
Would there be a redemption arc later?
this I hands down one of the best smut novel I have read. great writing style and the characters descriptions are amazing, sadly I just do not like MC getting cucked so I have to drop. But great work by the way!
I absolutely hate the way the story goes it would have been ten times better without the ntr
I'm not a fan of NTR at all but if the rest of the story hurts it it hurts it a little, the author's way of writing is very good, speaking of the erotic answer, if you don't like NTR don't even watch this 3 stars for the good scenes , the ntr and the story that in general the non-erotic is quite bad
Just drop the Ntr and this book will be a 5 star masterpiece better than even all your other books .As You've seen in the reviews of almost if not everyone Ntr is the only thing ruining this book
don't drop author....[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
this story is much better then the other one you are posting
I feel the Ntr in this isn’t needed tbh , almost like there’s no reason why there should be Ntr at all. Would there be a redemption arc later?
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I haven’t read it yet but does the mc get ntr or does he ntr other people?
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bro the book is great. continue writing!
Bro why did you let that old man do that (that is why I dropped)
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Sobat kukira hanya tentang keluarga saja namun temannya juga ikut. Heeeeh sangat tidak masuk akal, masak MC mau fi ntr sama temannya sendiri