You should really write more .i liked it very much.and suspense is the main key .i am excited to know about that day.[img=Feeling it].it is your first story but your writing style is really good. You said that English is not your first language but your English is very good.
You should really write more .i liked it very much.and suspense is the main key .i am excited to know about that day.[img=Feeling it].it is your first story but your writing style is really good. You said that English is not your first language but your English is very good.