the story is funny, but the translation is horrible
8 months ago
9
Appleballcat
nice fanfic with readable grammar.........
10 months ago
4
Jacob_Markert_8979
Would be a cool story if it was readable. Got to Chapter 14 and finally gave up. It hurt to try and understand this but I do like the concept
22 days ago
3
Manhwas
author here.... do give it a try... do give it a try....you might like it...
8 months ago
2
Sajad381
Name of navol?????????"?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
10 months ago
2
SloppyFishFingers
Terrible translation, story is ok, power is a bit pointless imo. Update frequency is good.
a month ago
1
shshsh01
the story is good. readable translation.
4 months ago
1
kosmas_kosmas
the story is good.if it was better translated it would have been great
4 months ago
1
AnimeFFF
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the story is funny, but the translation is horrible
nice fanfic with readable grammar.........
Would be a cool story if it was readable. Got to Chapter 14 and finally gave up. It hurt to try and understand this but I do like the concept
author here.... do give it a try... do give it a try....you might like it...
Name of navol?????????"?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Terrible translation, story is ok, power is a bit pointless imo. Update frequency is good.
the story is good. readable translation.
the story is good.if it was better translated it would have been great
Give me more.... Give me more.... Give me more...Give me more.... Give me more.... Give me more...Give me more.... Give me more.... Give me more...Give me more.... Give me more.... Give me more...Give me more.... Give me more.... Give me more...
fun to read....good fan fic....good fanfic