Douluo : My Diary System

it really good so all I wanna say to the author is give me more!!!

no synopsis at all just another shill for his patron what a loser get a job loser

Bem chato na verdade as vês e engraçado mas ficar lendo da e dor de cabeça 😐além do mas ele simplesmente bota outro rank de cultivo sendo que o rank de cultivo original e bem decepcionante na verdade

Much better than the mtl at least you fixed it up some cause the mtl almost had my brain melting.

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First > mc defend a rapist ... o thought that should be first thing that you guys should know the format of ff is anoying ... the english is readable ... the chronology doenst work .... 160 ch to pass 5 - 10 days... thast not slow pace its a ultra mega slow pace...

Honestly much better Soul land story than others on webnovel. Only thing could be better is the chapter released date. Do keep up the good work 👍

The plot is decent, but the grammar has negatively affected the story, making it confusing and some parts not making any sense

why does he write in his diary as if he is communicating with real people?. who told him that he should reveal the entire plot of the world of "soul land"?. I understand nothing. he could just go outside and write in a book everything that happens on the street. describe each person's appearance down to the smallest detail. Or I'm dumb. or the authors of these fanfictions called "diary....." are stupid.

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