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Very nice history, waiting for more updates

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I cant express how much i like the novel it so superb

Interesting story! More uploaded chapters can go a long way

This is a story written as a script, which is not my favorite to begin with, but the amount of errors of orthography and syntax make it almost impossible to read. Also the "acts" are very short and you can find mentions of Chat GPT in the text, which was probably the tool used to create this low quality "story".

I've always found reading scripts difficult to follow in general. So, this one didn't work so well for me.

I really like stories like these, they are very interesting

Nice book, great story line. And Interesting characters.

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this is a really great thing to read here

Not enough to write a proper review yet but seems to be written like a play script, which is interesting. Would suggest having a font to break up speech and actions

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Rewiewing for fast pass. I think some part needs improvement