Honkai Star Rail: Developing Mobile Games on Xianzhou

Please update 2 chapter per day hehe ^^ the story is so good that I really want to read it more!!

Good fic, with a decent plot. Weird chinese romance so don't expect much. Absolutely ruined by the translator though. Names are messed up, it's hard to tell if the audience is speaking or a character.

it's really enjoyable fic I hope it will continue

The lack of proofreading is destroying this good story, it's an MTL so expect typos, spelling mistakes, etc. For the story itself is focusing on reaction of masses to the game (HSR) developed by MC and the consequences when everyone get 'spoiled' by the game story, effective changing the canon a bit like some fight that supposed to be longer became short, the nameless travelers know their future journey from the game so they prepared much more thoroughly. The MC given really short screen time like once of twenty chapter, there nothing much known about him honestly he transmigrated, get game maker system, upload the game, then buying teritorial creation like abilities from the system shop (can control anything within the supposed range) and some kind of dream walker skill, that basically all of it. He only has few interaction with other characters and also not actively seeking some actions, a boring MC honestly.

As much as I've liked to give this a five or four point five, it's clear that the 'translating' part is either lacking or made by an AI. Aside from that, the story has potential, evident from the fact that there's a proper reaction from the characters and their story being revealed throughout the universe. In any case, have a four.

A good and fun story. My main criticism is the translation is somewhat lacking- it's clearly performed by a machine, with little if any proofreading.

10/10

Definitely one of the better reaction fic out there. a must read

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Uff, very, very good. This fanfiction is a true gem for any Honkai: Star Rail enthusiast. The author's dedication to crafting a compelling and engaging story is evident in every chapter. The narrative is rich with imaginative details and well-developed characters that feel authentic and relatable. The writing is both captivating and immersive, drawing readers into a world where each event and interaction feels significant and meaningful. The plot is intricately woven, balancing action, emotion, and intrigue, making it impossible to put the book down. Fans of the series will appreciate the attention to detail and the creative ways the fanfiction expands upon the original content, offering fresh perspectives and deeper insights. It's a must-read for anyone looking to delve further into the Honkai: Star Rail universe and experience a story that honors the original while bringing its own unique flair.

harem anyone?.............................................................................................................................................