His Smile, Her Glow, My Betrayal

I really hope that there will be more. I loved the flow of the story and the fact it didn’t take so king for the plot of the mistress wannabe to unravel! Not enough stories like this and I truly wish there was more!!!

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nakakaiyak sya nak, worth it naman 8/10 ka nak kasi dipa tapos

This story is actually very good. I enjoyed every part of it and was a little bummed when it ended. There was a couple mistakes, but didn't change the experience. I hope more chapters are published!

I love the story yet sometimes it needs to be proof read before publishing and make sure to get that good plot and climax. But despite of everything, it is still a good story. I want to know though why does Alex became cold at first then when he realized he lost the girl who truly cares about him finally keeps chasing her..

I saw this on Facebook and it piqued my interest and I love to read. I’m glad I gave this novel a chance, I’m wondering how it going to end and if Vivian is really sorry or she’s up to something. Keep up the good work!🫶🏽😘

Its very good but it shoul not be written too long or else it will turn boring along the way. It also depends on author on how they want to end this both HE and BE is acceptable after all not everyone can give second chance if theyre badly hurt right. Its unfair to them even if theyre just a character inside abook.

I believe it is written well enough for a book that was not published in print, only found online, and has no distinguished author. However, the story seems to contradict itself and change the plot a great many times. It needs to focus on one story, not multiple.

There's a few mistakes but the story is easy to read, I like the story but I think is a bit clichè , that's ok 👍 👌 🙆‍♀️ 😄 😉 😀 👍 👌 🙆‍♀️ 😄 😉 😀 👍 👌 🙆‍♀️ 😄 😉 😀 👍 👌 🙆‍♂️ 😄 😉 😀 👍 👌 🙆‍♂️ 😄 😉 😀 👍 👌 🙆‍♂️ 😄 😉 😀 👍 👌 🙆‍♂️ 😄 😉 😀 👍 👌 🙆‍♂️ 😄 😉 😀 👍 👌 🙆‍♂️ 😄 😉 😀

Would love to see more!! There are very few errors which is rare on here.

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