Transmigrated with a wish system
Michael, an ordinary and average guy, suddenly finds himself in a dangerous fantasy cultivation world after being randomly chosen in a multiversal lottery. Armed with a wish system that may taunt him some times, grants him one wish every week, Michael has to survive in this harsh world of cultivators, monsters, and mysterious powers. However, the system has strict rules—he can’t wish for direct power.
However average Michael was, he loved his family on Earth and that's why his main goal is to return to Earth. To do that, he must climb to the highest realm of cultivation, all while avoiding greedy enemies and dangerous beasts. With each wish, Michael gets closer to his goal, but the challenges only grow tougher as the world around him becomes more dangerous.
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It’s readable I guess, better then those novels where grammar is nonexistent.
It is a good story. The main thing is that quality of the chapters is good, the main character also feels like he is someone transmigrated and not a literal native.
please update this. this novel was pretty good
Hello!!! I know I said just minutes ago that I would wait to post a review, however I don't feel like sleeping tonight! Anyhow, to keep this great story from being spoiled, I'll try to only dance around some stuff. To be honest, one of the gramatically best novels I have read. I look at some of the AI translated ones and it's like comparing Heaven with Earth (hahaha... ha). Then, the story development. You are doing a great job pacing the story with the system in question. It's hard to not go from weak to a godly figure with wishes, so I can understand some of what you've done with the character. The character design is a bit iffy, to say the least. He can wish for so many other things that would make him powerful, but he chooses things that I do not agree with. But once again, I know you're compensating. Besides that, the characters have very unique personalities that I can actually relate to, which makes reading this a lot more enjoyable. The updating stability is... Uh......... Just make sure to keep up with the story. The world background is pretty basic. I like the exclusion of manuals; that concept always drives me nuts. The reason I'm rating this 5 stars is because it can further develop. I'm intrigued by the empires being included in the Murim and the dynamics between classes and cultivators. I have really enjoyed this so far and hope you can keep it up... Also, you know what I'm hoping for later. I'll be waiting...
good idea ruined by brain dead mc and possibly author three wishes not optimal at all, were you high author when you wrote this I thought mc would be OP with such a wish System, I'll stop here...anymore and I'll end up saying some seriously bad stuff.