It is a very fine, detailed, piece of work. However, there are major and/or minor issues with the story, such as, character description and background information. It is a story filled with lots of toxic/dark romance, I believe. I think you should get the main character to ditch the 'boyfriend' and get her to be with the 'stranger' from the first chapter. Still a great piece of work, continue improving on it.
It is a very fine, detailed, piece of work. However, there are major and/or minor issues with the story, such as, character description and background information. It is a story filled with lots of toxic/dark romance, I believe. I think you should get the main character to ditch the 'boyfriend' and get her to be with the 'stranger' from the first chapter. Still a great piece of work, continue improving on it.