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The Great Old Ones roared in the Cosmos, heralding the impending apocalypse. The "Order" authority, which could minimize the risk of losing control, became the target of the Great Old Ones' contention.
However, the Great Old Ones were unaware that the Sefirah, Nation of Disorder, symbolizing both order and distortion, had just been acquired by a young man named Hobert, whose mysterious background was hidden from the world. Hobert, having joined the Tarot Club, began to build the order of the human world, gradually mastering the authority of Order.
(cover is Justiciar, but MC is Black Emperor path, I just think Justiciar has a better symbol)
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Original: 诡秘:新的黑皇帝降临
#lotm #lordofmysteries #lordofthemysteries #translation #lom
This was originally for my own enjoyment, but out of the kindness of my heart and definitely not anything else, I've graciously decided to post 1 chapter a day on Webnovel :)
I’ve currently read up to chapter 100, and now I decided to stack. First off, the dedication the author put into this novel is insane. I’m pretty sure they update a chapter per day, and even if it’s less, 68 chapters came out when most of my other novels only got like 10. While quite similar to other fanfics, the MC has a pretty interesting golden finger, and I enjoy reading about the lawyer pathway. I’d say the one “negative” aspect of this story is that it is a bit slow paced. This is purely my preference towards fan fics, since many times they don’t need to be drawn out. The author does do an amazing job in these chapters, which could definitely make the pace worth it. That being said, anyone who enjoys a “slower” novel that has an amazing plot and depth would love this. (I get that LOTM and other peak novels are just as “slow” in terms of lacing, but the only reason i brought this up is because this is a fan fic). If the author wants to write this like an actual story, theyre doing a great job. Sorry for the long reveiw.
I did read up to 437. Over all story is good. But small details make it less in tone of LOM. I give an example as I read two stories simultaneously I can compare, in one MC created himself false identity for tarot club, because of certain circumstances he can't be seen by Klein. So he every time carefully think what and when he can speak and what reasonable knowledge for his created identity he can share with tarot club to not raise suspicions. His actions measured, detailed and carefully planned for steps steps ahead and consequences of his actions. This story? MC don't tried too hard to hide his identity and tarot members don't debout him nor they are curious of to where he got his very ADVANCED knowledge caps here for a reason. Main character sharing his knowledge without seconds thought, only on real key things that can actually kill tarot members he does filter, but over all zero trying to cover up. And none doubts from tarot members and outside world easley buy almost all his excuses. Now, characters themselves outside of some paranoia are written good. There is romance, but very very timid. Then MC himself, when it doesn't matter he acts okay, smart even. But at some plot moments you can almost actually see scenario log where author writes AUTHORS WILL MC -100 intelligence debuff. Same thing for characters when it's convenient to the plot they suddenly lost wisdom and intelligence. I read it avidly, but because quality is good, plot holes and characters stupidity look out of place and really spoils story for me.
Epic!!!, more and more chapters please....
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This is surprisingly good by webnovel standards—definitely a cut above the usual fare.
Yo i thought of translating this novel after my current one but now i see you are already translating it so go and complete it , It's good if you do ood translation
Better than I expected. Enjoying so far so good Let’s see what the future holds I am not sure whether the original fanfic has been finished or how manay chapters are there now. It would be good to know.
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Honestly I’m not going to go into much but it’s just really good I highly recommend giving it a read.
Lowkey my first review on webnovel but saw how it only had 2 and needed it to get more attention to how great it is so far. Cant wait to see what you bring to the rest of it.
I can wait to see how you deal with Roselle, will the MC conflict with klive?I can’t wait to see how you will go about this conflict!!!!