The Reluctant Ascendant
Bound by the chains of destiny and the fragmented memories of a life he never lived, Edran finds himself reincarnated in a world where strength reigns supreme. Trapped in the body of a fallen legend, he struggles to reconcile his own gentle nature with the brutal expectations of a ruthless world. With every step, he fights against the shackles of fate that dictate his path, his choices constrained by forces beyond his control.
But even as he battles to survive and find his place in a world that seems intent on breaking him, Edran’s unwavering spirit becomes a beacon of hope. Lost, unfit, and burdened by a past that isn’t his, he strives to carve his own path, defying the destiny that seeks to bind him. In a land where power is all that matters, his journey is one of quiet strength and relentless perseverance, inspiring others as he faces impossible odds with courage and grace.
It looks promising, pacing can be increase more but I personally like slow story building, keeps us link to characters more. I am looking forward to reading more about Ravian story, I am more interested in him than the MC 😅
Writing a shameless self review [img=proud] I know it’s a bit early, but I couldn’t resist writing a review of my own story! I’ve only completed a few chapters so far, but I’m excited about the direction it’s heading. My motivation is to create a story that’s rich in character development and depth, especially with the protagonist. I’m taking my time to explore his complexities, desires, and conflicts so that I can shape him into a truly unique and captivating main character. My goal is to craft a novel that not only entertains but leaves a lasting impact. I hope to create a world and a story that readers can get lost in, with twists and turns that keep them hooked till the very end!
Nice work man Found it interesting but could you Please increase the pace Overall it’s really good and I enjoyed it Waiting for another one 😊