Reborn into the world of Naruto, our protagonist finds himself in the Yamanaka Clan, traditionally known for its mental jutsu rather than combat prowess. However, things take a turn when he awaken a rare Kekkei Genkai: **Psychokinesis**. "Weak in combat, you say? Let me show you the true power of Telekinesis!" Follow his journey as he shatter expectations, mastering his unique abilities and rising to become the most powerful force in the Shinobi world.
I like psychic idea, but you could do better than that.. The first mistake is to start the story 3 weeks after reincarnation - there's no reason to do that. In other words there's no proper introduction to mc and his abilities. Now when he uses his psychic abilities (basically only telekinesis) they seem wonky - not fleshed out at all. Also, from readers perspective mc is very arrogant. Everyone in his circle follow him like idiots. He even provoked the Hokage in his office! Sorry to say this, but this ff is mediocre.
Don’t even have to read it I know this is fire cause Hkj is the author
Wow the whole psychokinesis stuff only amounted to immobilizing weaker shinobi and remotely manipulating kunai. What a letdown. The MC's character leaves much to be desired he gets attacked by Danzo and Hiruzen's minions but he ignores it and continues being a happy go lucky guy without any retribution , he has a theoretically very powerful and versatile ability which he uses for throwing kunai at people. Just so disappointing man. One of the blandest Naruto fanfic MC's I've ever read.
Its a solid start to a novel, somewhat slow paced but it does have its specialities.
Keep up the good work
I'm enjoying the story. Keep up the good work, author.
okish, could be better. MC is beta, I feel it's Chinese fic sometimes. Author?
very good the psychic idea in the world of Naruto is really interesting, I hope the plot isn't too slow, it's really boring.....................
Story is still at the beginning. Not much has happened. Grammer is good. Characters could be better written, but they are fine. My only concern is update stability and the chance of this being dropped like the author’s previous novels.