Naruto: Konoha's Psychic

Wow the whole psychokinesis stuff only amounted to immobilizing weaker shinobi and remotely manipulating kunai. What a letdown. The MC's character leaves much to be desired he gets attacked by Danzo and Hiruzen's minions but he ignores it and continues being a happy go lucky guy without any retribution , he has a theoretically very powerful and versatile ability which he uses for throwing kunai at people. Just so disappointing man. One of the blandest Naruto fanfic MC's I've ever read.

I like psychic idea, but you could do better than that.. The first mistake is to start the story 3 weeks after reincarnation - there's no reason to do that. In other words there's no proper introduction to mc and his abilities. Now when he uses his psychic abilities (basically only telekinesis) they seem wonky - not fleshed out at all. Also, from readers perspective mc is very arrogant. Everyone in his circle follow him like idiots. He even provoked the Hokage in his office! Sorry to say this, but this ff is mediocre.

Don’t even have to read it I know this is fire cause Hkj is the author

okish, could be better. MC is beta, I feel it's Chinese fic sometimes. Author?

Don’t even have to read it I know this is not ending cause Hkj is the author

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Its a solid start to a novel, somewhat slow paced but it does have its specialities.

Keep up the good work

I'm enjoying the story. Keep up the good work, author.

Cool concept that falls kinda flat not to mention the dumbing down of allies so MC can point at the obvious point and then they can do the whole “aha, you are so smart”. Several times the Nara clan head is one of those people and this is a wild take considering how smart they are supposed to be. Gets scared in a fight and unlocks the ability to use all five elements with ease. If you are a faceless mook, expect to be insta killed by an Unblockable flying knive but if you have a part in the original story you have super plot armor. MC actively is trying to make the story go better but not a single thing has changed so far. If you want a si with 80 chapters so far who is actively trying to change the story but has had zero effect read this. I forgot to mention that he is a super strong and still toothless.

Simplesmente Cinema, umas das poucas histórias não-harem dessa plataforma e tambem a primeira que o casal é a coitada da Kurotsuchi kkkkkk...........................................

story is quiet interesting with equally interesting power i am enjoying reading. Highly recommend to give it a try 👍