Here's the updated draft for Chapter 1, incorporating the detail where Ryo asks his father's secretary via phone to secure
The Buzz in the City
The bustling streets of the city were alive with chatter and the hum of traffic. Massive screens adorned the sides of skyscrapers, each broadcasting the latest advertisements and news. One commercial caught the attention of passersby, and a crowd began to gather.
"Step into the world of Gaia!" the voice echoed from the screen, capturing the excitement of the moment.
Ryo Takeda stood among the crowd, his eyes wide with anticipation. The vibrant visuals filled the screen, showcasing breathtaking landscapes—verdant forests, towering mountains, and ancient ruins.
Ryo's Excitement
"Join millions of players in the ultimate VRMMORPG experience, where your choices shape the world!" the commercial continued, displaying characters engaged in epic battles against ferocious monsters.
A group of teenagers nearby gasped, their eyes glued to the screen. "Did you see that spell?" one exclaimed. "It lit up the whole night! I can't believe how real it looks!"
Ryo felt a surge of excitement. "This is exactly what I've been waiting for!" he thought, unable to contain his enthusiasm.
The Game Features
The commercial shifted, highlighting the high-tech VR Capsule players would use to immerse themselves in the game. "To fully experience Gaia, you'll need the latest VR Capsule! Step inside, and feel every moment as if you're truly there!"
The voice grew more intense, outlining the game's features:
"Gaia offers an innovative skill acquisition system, allowing you to develop skills through your actions rather than tedious grinding. Engage in thrilling combat with our dynamic damage system, experience the thrill of high stakes, and navigate through beautifully crafted territories."
"Join forces with friends in our Party System, or create lasting bonds in a Guild for exclusive quests and community benefits. Explore vast landscapes on foot or mount, as there are no teleportation mechanics—your journey matters!"
"And here's the best part: earn in-game currency that you can convert into real cash! That's right—every battle, every quest brings you closer to tangible rewards!"
The crowd erupted into cheers, their excitement palpable as the promise of rewards resonated throughout the square.
The Global Frenzy
Across the world, news of Gaia spread like wildfire. People from all walks of life scrambled to secure a VR Capsule, hoping that the game would offer them a chance to escape their harsh realities.
In some places, demand far exceeded supply. Fights broke out in stores as people jostled to be the first in line. In desperate corners of society, some even resorted to stealing to get their hands on the coveted capsules, believing that Gaia was their ticket out of misery.
Celebration Up Above
Meanwhile, in a lavish conference room high above the city, developers and investors celebrated the successful launch of the commercial. Laughter and clinking glasses filled the air. One of the lead developers raised his glass, proclaiming, "We've done it! All our hard work and investments will not go to waste! Gaia is going to change the gaming world!"
As the commercial reached its climax, the logo of Gaia shone against a mystical backdrop, while a tagline rolled across the bottom: "Are you ready to enter Gaia?"
Ryo's Next Steps
As the crowd began to disperse, Ryo's mind raced with possibilities. "I need to secure a VR Capsule at the market," he decided, determination settling in his chest.
Quickly, he pulled out his phone and browsed through the marketplace app, searching for listings. "Let's see... two VR Capsules," he muttered, scrolling through the options.
"Wow, prices are high. I hope I can find a good deal."
He scanned through the various vendors, comparing features and prices, determination fueling his search. "I have to get one for Shurei too. We can't miss out on this!"
Then, without hesitation, he dialed his father's secretary. "Good evening, this is Ryo," he began, his tone calm yet direct. "I need you to secure two VR Capsules for me as soon as possible. Can you take care of that?"
The response on the other end was immediate. "Of course, young master. I'll have them delivered to you by tomorrow."
Ryo smiled to himself. "Perfect. Thanks." He hung up the phone, confident that he and Shurei would be among the first to experience the adventures awaiting them in Gaia.