A story about an betrayed master , who doesn't use qi , the basic form of energy in the murim . Vowed to get revenge and conquer the world and a story of an rising star against the master......
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i am thinking this as the cover page please rate it
4 months ago
2
Sohan_Easwar
Bro Hari, make the pacing a bit more slow. Cuz everthing is happening so fast and its like a brief of the story. AND MAKE A COVER PAGE FASTT!
3 months ago
1
Poisoned_Cyclone
The author has the ability to use proper grammar which immediately makes this a lot better than most other novels here. but i really don't like how the novels written, it just seems like I'm reading a summary instead of an actual story, it just briefly explained the background of the MC, and the world but other than that it's just bland.
Rate this story freely! i am thinking this as the cover page please rate it
Bro Hari, make the pacing a bit more slow. Cuz everthing is happening so fast and its like a brief of the story. AND MAKE A COVER PAGE FASTT!
The author has the ability to use proper grammar which immediately makes this a lot better than most other novels here. but i really don't like how the novels written, it just seems like I'm reading a summary instead of an actual story, it just briefly explained the background of the MC, and the world but other than that it's just bland.