So, after multiple breaks and whatnot, I was finally able to complete this volume. The first volume and the second as well, are the foundation of the story that will start with volume three. Even I am kind of angry with myself for taking so long for them. If you think only readers get frustrated when their MC gets bashed and can't retaliate, believe me, authors feel the same. At least I do lmao.
But, this was necessary. first I thought of starting the story itself from 3rd volume and using the backstory as a flashback but tbh, it won't make much sense in the long run. Especially since I am trying to write a multi-dimensional character, it's much harder. This story has many layers all of them will unfold slowly and satisfyingly.
If you already read this, you might have seen some inconsistencies, right? like Tamara told sorken she was a healer but using light magic? There is no gain in keeping it a mystery when it is as simple as that, she lied to him. Why? That actually is the mystery. Why would you lie to someone already going to die and can't exactly understand what's going on?
As for the power system. it will be properly introduced in 3rd volume as well. The second volume will be very interesting and short, perhaps less than thirty chapters. I already have a half-completed draft for 2nd volume so hopefully, before the next month's end, I will drop it all.
There are not so many readers right now, I hope there will be. With that, I could get some opinion and stuff but I hope everyone who reads it can drop their opinions and some power stones as well. Heh, bye.