My first time publishing please read patiently.
Jack is always surrounded by mystery born in the 20th century where they are more evils that good.
He is aware of the changes around him and he didn't care since him and his loved ones are happy and save. Happiness is forever so he thought.
When tragedy struck at those around him, he taught law was the solution and that the law enforcement officers (police) will help and bring him justice.
Then, he saw the bad side of society, the system that no one could help him.
That when he decided to put the matter into his own hands.
JOKER
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Context:
There are two people in the middle of a deserted street at 4 @am.
Rain falling heavily creating a sound proof around.
One of them standing and stepping on the other person on the floor with their backs touching the cold floor and the rain is watching their bleeding body that never seems to end.
"Please Joker forgive me, I have wife and kids waiting for me to come home", pleaded victim 1.
Joker responded menacingly while starting at the man with a cold glear and blood shot eyes, " so you have a life to live? you choosed this path. You should have made a better decision 2 years ago".
The man seeing that Joker wouldn't let him go cried while looking at the floor thinking that it was truly his fault he made that mistake and moved on which was wrong.
But it was too late to say sorry.
Joker stared at him nonchalantly getting impatient to go home and sleep since was past his bed time.
Pissed off by the man attitude and state, he said to him.
" Stop being a man baby no matter how you cry you are going to die anyways".
After speaking, he took his rider gloves from his back pocket and started to wear it getting ready for his next act.
Bending down to swat to mach the man's eye level, he holds his victim chin to make eye contact.
Tilting his head to the right he asked his victim coldly, any last words?
The man started at Joker for a moment by now he had already stopped crying and the rain automatically stopped too.
It seems that time was slowing down. Opening his mouth slowly he wanted to tell his wishes but it was already too late.
Joker had already snapped his neck in an instant.
"Tsk on a second thought when you took action two years ago you didn't give them a chance either, right?", he said talking to the already dead body.
After taking his gloves from his hands and putting it in his back pocket he used his pinky finger to clean his ear and said, " Good luck on the other side".
He then stepped over the body while on his way back home. After some distance he paused and turned around.
"That is..... if some over there will take you of course", he said after thinking then continued on his way.
Hi everyone, I am the writer of this work and I give myself 10 over 10 because I believe that my novel is unique and uncommon. To prove that am doing a excellent job NOTE: 50% male readers 10% female readers 40% other readers It is not easy to capture the readers attention especially males and sorry but no there's no romance maybe a little flirting but the Main character goes solo. Read the description and for anymore questions comment below. Enjoy
It’s so poorly written I couldn’t get past the first chapter. I stopped at the conversation with his mother. I understand this is the author’s first book, but why publish the first uneditted draft? It’s not a fun read when I’m editing as I read.
Hi fellow newbie! I’ve really enjoyed seeing where you’ve taken this so far. I’m curious to see what comes next. Remember, don’t give up—I’m here to keep your spirits up! Oh, and if you have a moment, could you check out my book? It’s a fantasy adventure titled Bellator: Rising. The story follows a hero’s journey in a world I’ve meticulously crafted from the ground up. You’ll discover a unique mana system, intriguing species, various countries, and rich cultures, each with their own religions and laws. This is my first book, and I’m genuinely eager to get some feedback. Whether you’re an experienced writer or just a fan of fantasy, your insights could really help me improve. I’d love to hear your honest opinions! Thanks so much for considering giving it a read. Best, Ikaris P.S. Your feedback would mean the world to me!
Oh wow 😳, now reading the synopsis I just hope the character (Joker) finds true love 😂. But then I love the synopsis, and yeah can't wait to start reading 🌝