The Grand Beast Master And Divine Lord Of Necromancy
Cain and Misha were inseparable high school sweethearts with a love as deep as it was fierce. But one fateful day, a tragic accident ends their lives… or so they thought. Instead of finding themselves in the afterlife, they awaken in a realm of shimmering light, face to face with Celestara, the Goddess of Rebirth and Fate.
Celestara offers them a second chance—not only to live again but to rise as powerful champions in a world on the brink of chaos. She reveals that a malevolent demon god, once sealed away by the ancient deities, is regaining strength and preparing to break free, threatening to annihilate everything in his path.
Cain and Misha accept her offer, but Celestara has one more surprise in store: she grants them the chance to choose their professions and abilities. Misha, with a fierce and wild heart, becomes the Grand Beast Master, gifted with the power to bond with and command mythical creatures of unrivaled strength. Cain, calm and calculated, embraces the role of Divine Lord of Necromancy, able to summon formidable spirits and control the forces of life and death itself.
However, the path to greatness is not so simple. Reincarnated into vastly different circumstances—Misha as a noblewoman, bound by social restrictions, and Cain as a commoner with little power or influence—they must struggle to find each other in this new world. The challenges they face alone test their love, their resolve, and their abilities in ways they never imagined.
As they embark on their quest to reunite and prepare for the demon god’s awakening, they discover that, together, their powers are limitless. But will it be enough to stop a god of destruction? And can they hold onto their love amidst the dark forces threatening to tear them—and the world they now call home—apart?
Join Cain and Misha in The Grand Beast Master and Divine Lord of Necromancy, an epic journey of romance, adventure, and power beyond imagination.
Author’s Note: No harem! Single female lead. Expect epic battles, amazing creatures, and protagonists who are destined to become legends.
Author’s Note: Hey everyone, I wanted to take a moment to update you all on the current status of the novel. With my exams coming up, it’s become difficult to balance studying and writing. Trying to manage both has left me feeling pretty burned out, and I’m not getting enough rest. So, after giving it a lot of thought, I’ve decided to put the novel on hiatus for now. But don’t worry—I’ll be back with even more chapters when I return, and I’m excited to dive in with renewed energy. I’m truly grateful to each of you who’s supported me along this journey. I know I still have a lot to learn as a writer, but with your encouragement, I’m committed to improving and bringing you a story you’ll love. Thank you so much for your understanding, and I look forward to seeing you all again soon! Warmly, [BrolyJamesWilliams]
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Chapter 1 shows a strong start with a captivating premise and a good foundation for the story. You've effectively established the dynamic between Cain and Misha, highlighting their contrasting personalities and the intensity of their bond. The bus hijacking scene is action-packed, effectively raising the stakes and introducing an immediate sense of danger. Your portrayal of Misha's fierce protectiveness and Cain's vulnerability creates a compelling dynamic. I particularly enjoy the way you've built anticipation for their future powers and how their chosen professions will play out in this new world. The ending, with Cain and Misha's sacrifice, is a powerful and impactful moment that leaves the reader wanting to know more. However, it might be helpful to introduce more subtle hints of their potential abilities throughout the chapter to further pique the reader's interest. Overall, you've created a solid foundation for a captivating story, and I'm eager to see how Cain and Misha's journey unfolds.
I like System novel especially the Op one I hope there will be element of evolution
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
I love the story it's not different than what you would have probably read it'it's just that but better because it does not try to be different just for the sake of being different writer knows what people enjoy reading and that's his biggest quality good luck for the future brother is a big writer in the making so I'll stay on his good side DDon't forget me when you make it big 👆
The story is well-crafted and holds great promise for the future. Above all, your own enjoyment in writing should be your priority. It’s not always about money or recognition, but about the joy of sharing your work with others. If your readers appreciate your stories, that alone is a meaningful achievement. Many focus only on the present, but some of us think long-term. This isn’t a critique—just a reminder that preserving what we cherish today is key to shaping a better tomorrow.