Scheming Storm

Scheming Storm

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Author: OliviaClark
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Although she was born into a wealthy family, her mother committed suicide due to depression after being betrayed by her father. She has no place in the family business, and while she lacks nothing materially, it cannot quell her thirst for power. Her career development has not matched her ambition and abilities. This time, with her sudden arrival, she is determined to seize everything she deserves. It is in the midst of her scheming storm that another woman, with ambitions just as fierce, crosses her path...

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Novel shines in character design—each personality feels distinct and well-developed, making the interactions engaging. However, the translation quality could be improved, as the flow in certain parts feels a bit stilted, affecting the overall reading experience. Additionally, more inner monologues would help provide deeper insight into the characters’ motivations and emotions. This would enhance the emotional impact of the story and make the characters even more relatable. Overall, there’s great potential here, and with some tweaks, it can reach another level. BTW I’m really looking forward to the continuation of Ada's story.[img=Loving it][img=Loving it]

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