The King Of Arsenal

I can only say one thing,the main character is a npc.He gives out such chatgpt responses like he wins man of the match and in his interview he just says things that scream to me this guy does not have emotions.He says the same phrases over and over again like im grateful to the fans,manager.Once you hear one time you're like alright no problem but this guy only has that response.Updates are very stable though so thats a plus.

It had a lovely bit of potential at the start, I guess I just really liked the concept as an Arsenal fan. Its flaws are too many to ignore though. The main character is as stiff as a wooden board, there is zero variation in his personality, he comes across as quite robotic in his responses. Then there's the pacing, every single match so far is written about over about 3 chapters and they all have the exact same energy. Which means literally every match feels the same, the opponents might as well be the same people because there is no real life to them, neither is there any life to the press or even any aspect of the footballing community at large. Everything in this rather LukeWarm.

I gave your writing quality and character design 2 and 3 stars (5 stars to other 3 categories). I've read your wrestler fic and this one and in both the stories I've seen same problem. in every single chapter you upload the MC feels rush of emotion once, feels grateful for everything twice, take a step in long journey thrice, think about the dedication of past, feels grateful for partners/ teammates, feeling surreal ffs he is a reincarnated soul. after reading two three chapters it becomes very repetitive. it would be okay for someone who reads and forget in next ten minutes but for anyone else it makes the story stale. I like where the story is going and I also like how you develop the story just don't repeat the same thing over and over again in different words in every single chapter.

keep up the good work bro can you add more chaps it's promising

The big problem with sport fanfic. Is they normally focus on writing about every match. So u get maybe one chapter every 5 chapters about the MC life. Litterally the novel becomes a running tally of every game he plays. While his life get put on hold and all he does is play a sport. It would be soo much better if u only describe the most important games and tell us about his life around them. otherwise it gets super boring and we get used to the games and never have any suspense built for any wins or loses.

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Gets borning very fast. Characters are all like broken robots repeating the same boring lines repeatedly. If you're gonna use AI, at least put in some effort, especially if you trying to fleece money from people.

Remove the reincarnation tag, add #super slow burn. Just another OC that has less charisma than a wood plank. Pacing is super slow. Even the slowest entity is light speed faster than this story. It must be 10000+ chapters long or be abandoned. Either it had to publish 20 chapters a day or the 1st professional season will never end. Interactions among the characters is less interesting than watching a wall paint dry. A.I fest and if we cut out the words and chapters padding this story barely has 30+ actual chapters. WQ 1 AI and enormous word padding. SD 1 Narration of a dry wall. CD 1 Dry wall's character. US 5 one chapter a day. But it needs at least 15+chapters a day considering AI doing the bulk work, that shouldn't be a problem. WB 3.

It's honestly a pretty enjoyable read. The man character is pretty talented, going through Arsenal's junior teams and has made his debut for the senior team. It is a breath of fresh air, seeing a non-translated football book of an English player who starts in the Premier League with big players. Let's hope the Author keeps the chapters coming.

Great work! Keep it up! Have great premises while it was somewhat slow paced but I like how it builds up! It's like we follow the character's journey from the MC was a child and slowly growing, of course, there were some time skips that helped in advancing the story much faster!

It's not bad. Actually, it's pretty interesting. The only issue I have with this sitory is the fact that it's quite obviously written by Al (or at least heavily modified by it) so that it's very VERY noticeable in every paragraph if you know how Al usually writes these kind of things, but other than making me roll my eyes it's not that big of an issue imo (but only because in my case I'm used to reading MTLs so it's not that much of a problem to me) Honestly, as far as Al stories go, this one is pretty good. If you like football I recommend you at least giving this one a chance, maybe you'll like it.

Ono of the best history in this site!!! After the start to creat his own chapters, the history just keep getting better and better. The romance is top notch, on of the few that really put some effort in development of the romance and the female lead. Keep the good work, you're doing great

If you like his other works and you are a football fan then you gonna like this. Bro don't miss. Just hope that the MC doesn't win everything from the get go.

It is a wonderful novel. Continue, my brother. Change some details. The novel does not look like it was written by a man. Thank you.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍