Arius' Adventures in DC

Okay so a shameless self review hope you all enjoy the story and have great days, if you have any advice or notice anything wrong let me know.

Not worth the oxygen required to sustain life whilst reading this 💩 Broly level Mc that loses every fight like a retard, can’t protect his mother and can’t even kill the person that kills her. So incredibly pathetic it’s disgusting

I find it wild that stories like this with drastically better writing and well crafted dialogue can somehow go completely unnoticed and then you have absolute garbage on the top of the leader board. There is literally a story like this with the same premise that feels like it is written by an edgy 7 year old and then you have this. Webnovel is weird

Not bad but it makes me annoyed. he basically is being use like a little bitch by the league they want him stranded on a shitty world with no one so they can call him when they need him. This MC has no balls to say fuk u if u want my help protecting this place u make me a citizen. if not u can try and make me leave.

Absolutely amazing finally, broly in DC seems to be such a good and easy Idea but after Like 5 other authors fcked IT up, I'm glad this one got IT right.

this is would have been a shiny novel but the author have to add a cloning part ruined it. shitty ass cloning fuck story

I loved it! It's a super engaging story with great writing and a great script! I'm really looking forward to reading more chapters of this story.

Don't waste your time, this MF took one of the most powerful characters created and made him pathetic, spineless, and dumb. Jesus Christ

I like the story and it's very interesting to read. Hope you keep posting more chapters

Story is not bad I gave it chance it been something I’ve put off reading reviews put for reviews it has it sound petty reviews to me but not story kinda slow their hype in there I’ve read it just pickin up

pls don't listen to all the ppl who are giving negative reviews they are just being whiny sons of bitches and just unhappy they can't relive their fantasies through the mc . the story is ok , we see the mc develop in character and learns from his mistakes, the mc gets rid of any of his pathetic flaws within two chapters of the series as he grows more confident in his abilities , the book is funny , the mc existence effects the existence of characters , the MC wants to get stronger but it isn't to be strongest the MC just enjoys training and becoming stronger even then the mc isn't emotionless guy who trains all the time , he likes indulging in the finer things in life , the fanfic focuses more on slice of life and actions , it's implied the MC train in the background but it isn't the main part of the story , the author doesn't include training scenes unless to show good character interactions and develop characters Now i will give u a warning i am patient guy so i cam tolerate a characters flaws as long the character changes and doesn't repeat the same mistake again . The mc in beginning of the story suffered from social anxiety , acceptance and confidence issues bc in his previous life bc everyone it his previous life rejected him . of course the mc stops acting that way bc as the story goes on , the mc gets to feel the power he contains , as he becomes more confident , he becomes cocky leading to him making mistakes leading him to make a mistake that cost him a lot , of course the mc learns from this experience the mc personality at this point in the story, the mc is confident , straightforward refuses beat around the bush he will tell u what he wants to do or what he feels , just like any Saiyan he likes to fight and he is trying to control his anger so he can control broly legendary form without losing control , so the mc is trying not be so quick jump into conflict unless it's neccessary or for revenge .The mc doesn't like being manipulative , the mc sees himself a strong and the mc isn't a coward and he will run hands with u if regardless of who u are . So far I like the fanfic the mc at most has average intelligence the mc is relatable in a lot of ways it's a breath of fresh air from the mc on this app who thinks they are aizen and some have the abilities to fool ppl even tho they shouldn't be capable of it and ppl seem to like it i don't know why

honestly, the book was better than I expected. I read the reviews and there were some many people bitching that I expected the story to be teash but I am glad I have it a chance. I liked the intro a little with the monkey mama. Even though I felt like he was way too weak, it only lasted for one to two chapters. The only problem i have is that Darkseid lost too easily, and there aren't many planet busting feats, but assuming it is one of the cartoon universes that makes sense. I have no real problem with the book so far. There are a few grammar mistakes, but they are fairly infrequent. Overall: 7.3 / 10

Impossibile est ut hoc opus legas, MC tam mutum est et ne dicas mihi quod mundum non intelligat, cibum ab extraneis in spatio non recipias, et multo minus circumire sermonem tuum de tellure tua, homunculus Saiyan est et agit sicut Goku ille, tam mutus est.

even though this story has some horny elements, it's fucking peak, so I recommend reading this.