Okay so a shameless self review hope you all enjoy the story and have great days, if you have any advice or notice anything wrong let me know.
a month ago
4
Blake_Langton
Not worth the oxygen required to sustain life whilst reading this 💩 Broly level Mc that loses every fight like a retard, can’t protect his mother and can’t even kill the person that kills her. So incredibly pathetic it’s disgusting
a month ago
18
The_man_The_myth
I find it wild that stories like this with drastically better writing and well crafted dialogue can somehow go completely unnoticed and then you have absolute garbage on the top of the leader board. There is literally a story like this with the same premise that feels like it is written by an edgy 7 year old and then you have this. Webnovel is weird
2 months ago
18
Bocifer
Absolutely amazing finally, broly in DC seems to be such a good and easy Idea but after Like 5 other authors fcked IT up, I'm glad this one got IT right.
2 months ago
8
LastGod
Not bad but it makes me annoyed. he basically is being use like a little bitch by the league they want him stranded on a shitty world with no one so they can call him when they need him. This MC has no balls to say fuk u if u want my help protecting this place u make me a citizen. if not u can try and make me leave.
22 days ago
5
Leopalheiro
I loved it! It's a super engaging story with great writing and a great script! I'm really looking forward to reading more chapters of this story.
2 months ago
5
King_of_Daoist
I like the story and it's very interesting to read. Hope you keep posting more chapters
2 months ago
2
Super_Killer_Mob16
this is would have been a shiny novel but the author have to add a cloning part ruined it.
shitty ass cloning fuck story
Okay so a shameless self review hope you all enjoy the story and have great days, if you have any advice or notice anything wrong let me know.
Not worth the oxygen required to sustain life whilst reading this 💩 Broly level Mc that loses every fight like a retard, can’t protect his mother and can’t even kill the person that kills her. So incredibly pathetic it’s disgusting
I find it wild that stories like this with drastically better writing and well crafted dialogue can somehow go completely unnoticed and then you have absolute garbage on the top of the leader board. There is literally a story like this with the same premise that feels like it is written by an edgy 7 year old and then you have this. Webnovel is weird
Absolutely amazing finally, broly in DC seems to be such a good and easy Idea but after Like 5 other authors fcked IT up, I'm glad this one got IT right.
Not bad but it makes me annoyed. he basically is being use like a little bitch by the league they want him stranded on a shitty world with no one so they can call him when they need him. This MC has no balls to say fuk u if u want my help protecting this place u make me a citizen. if not u can try and make me leave.
I loved it! It's a super engaging story with great writing and a great script! I'm really looking forward to reading more chapters of this story.
I like the story and it's very interesting to read. Hope you keep posting more chapters
this is would have been a shiny novel but the author have to add a cloning part ruined it. shitty ass cloning fuck story
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I like it. Good job. Continue doing a good job. I like broly, I like dc, I like si's, And this has all three. I Like Scared Darkseid.
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Very good surprisingly nobody has ever done a saiyan in dc right until now keep up the good work
I am enjoying the read. Don't look at how many chapters there are, each chapter is massive.