Okay so a shameless self review hope you all enjoy the story and have great days, if you have any advice or notice anything wrong let me know.
4 months ago
7
Blake_Langton
Not worth the oxygen required to sustain life whilst reading this 💩 Broly level Mc that loses every fight like a retard, can’t protect his mother and can’t even kill the person that kills her. So incredibly pathetic it’s disgusting
4 months ago
39
The_man_The_myth
I find it wild that stories like this with drastically better writing and well crafted dialogue can somehow go completely unnoticed and then you have absolute garbage on the top of the leader board. There is literally a story like this with the same premise that feels like it is written by an edgy 7 year old and then you have this. Webnovel is weird
5 months ago
23
LastGod
Not bad but it makes me annoyed. he basically is being use like a little bitch by the league they want him stranded on a shitty world with no one so they can call him when they need him. This MC has no balls to say fuk u if u want my help protecting this place u make me a citizen. if not u can try and make me leave.
3 months ago
19
Bocifer
Absolutely amazing finally, broly in DC seems to be such a good and easy Idea but after Like 5 other authors fcked IT up, I'm glad this one got IT right.
4 months ago
10
Leopalheiro
I loved it! It's a super engaging story with great writing and a great script! I'm really looking forward to reading more chapters of this story.
5 months ago
5
Super_Killer_Mob16
this is would have been a shiny novel but the author have to add a cloning part ruined it.
shitty ass cloning fuck story
2 months ago
4
VISHAL_SINGH_4070
fucking price of shitty ff a mc elwho thinks with hos dick rather than brain and functions on animal based instinct of food fight and mate I don't understand the thinking of author here on what basis did he write this shit of a ff
a month ago
2
Jploui93
Don't waste your time, this MF took one of the most powerful characters created and made him pathetic, spineless, and dumb. Jesus Christ
2 months ago
2
King_of_Daoist
I like the story and it's very interesting to read. Hope you keep posting more chapters
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4 months ago
1
Zyddl_Frt
I like it.
Good job.
Continue doing a good job.
I like broly,
I like dc,
I like si's,
And this has all three.
I Like Scared Darkseid.
4 months ago
1
Dominique_Kirkman
Story is not bad I gave it chance it been something I’ve put off reading reviews put for reviews it has it sound petty reviews to me but not story kinda slow their hype in there I’ve read it just pickin up
Okay so a shameless self review hope you all enjoy the story and have great days, if you have any advice or notice anything wrong let me know.
Not worth the oxygen required to sustain life whilst reading this 💩 Broly level Mc that loses every fight like a retard, can’t protect his mother and can’t even kill the person that kills her. So incredibly pathetic it’s disgusting
I find it wild that stories like this with drastically better writing and well crafted dialogue can somehow go completely unnoticed and then you have absolute garbage on the top of the leader board. There is literally a story like this with the same premise that feels like it is written by an edgy 7 year old and then you have this. Webnovel is weird
Not bad but it makes me annoyed. he basically is being use like a little bitch by the league they want him stranded on a shitty world with no one so they can call him when they need him. This MC has no balls to say fuk u if u want my help protecting this place u make me a citizen. if not u can try and make me leave.
Absolutely amazing finally, broly in DC seems to be such a good and easy Idea but after Like 5 other authors fcked IT up, I'm glad this one got IT right.
I loved it! It's a super engaging story with great writing and a great script! I'm really looking forward to reading more chapters of this story.
this is would have been a shiny novel but the author have to add a cloning part ruined it. shitty ass cloning fuck story
fucking price of shitty ff a mc elwho thinks with hos dick rather than brain and functions on animal based instinct of food fight and mate I don't understand the thinking of author here on what basis did he write this shit of a ff
Don't waste your time, this MF took one of the most powerful characters created and made him pathetic, spineless, and dumb. Jesus Christ
I like the story and it's very interesting to read. Hope you keep posting more chapters
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I like it. Good job. Continue doing a good job. I like broly, I like dc, I like si's, And this has all three. I Like Scared Darkseid.
Story is not bad I gave it chance it been something I’ve put off reading reviews put for reviews it has it sound petty reviews to me but not story kinda slow their hype in there I’ve read it just pickin up