Silent Descent: Retrieval

Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.

Such a good start , the first chapter is like a philosophical verse , I liked the MC way of thinking , he keeps it simple keep up bro

So far the story has a lot of potential and I kinda enjoy the mc, I just hate the fact that during one of the beginning chapters he let himself get punched on the stomach and didn’t get revenge

Great! What a dark life. Let's see where this end to. Good work, author