As Orson read the novel written by the girlfriend who had left him, he gently remarked on how terrible the story was. But then, noticing a foul smell coming from the kitchen, he went to investigate. He realized there was some kind of gas leak. Already furious about being dumped, Orson became even angrier at the state of his kitchen, and in his rage, he hit the light switch with a powerful punch. Naturally, the explosion that followed killed him instantly, and Orson passed into the afterlife.
After spending some time in limbo, he found himself reincarnated in an unfamiliar world. However, he quickly realized he had been reborn inside the cliché-filled novel written by his ex-girlfriend. As if that wasn’t enough, he had ended up in the body of Neonidas, a useless duke who was also the fiancé of the story's villainess.
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There may be a bit too much swearing and slang in the first chapters, but it gets less afterwards.
There will be no yuri, bl or ntr in Neonidas(MC) harem
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I've found another potential diamond !! . my luck is insanely good these days. pacing is good. mc is slowly getting stronger and has likeable personality. World building is decent.. though power system is not explained till now ,hope author does it in future . I like the info-dump in this novel where it is slow and gradual unlike when authors simple put 3 pages worth info at the very beginning ( which I'll definitely skip lmao🤣). nice start .. hope author keeps it up and doesn't bottle potential banger
absolutely perfect. There is not a single chapter where u will feel bored. great job author ,will be waiting for upcoming chapters👍. And yes if possible increase Romance scenes with Solara.
The story has an interesting premise, but the way the mc is acts is nothing short of a letdown . He doesn't want to survive with the way he acts and talks . The only reason he'll survive in the future chapters is that i speculate , is through sheer plot armors.
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I couldn't continue this novel past the first few chapters. A lot of swear words. The MC keeps making enemies unnecessarily. I understand that they were already enemies beforehand but MC keeps insulting them and enraging them even without developing adequate strength to protect himself. He is lazy, and thinks with his lower half. You might say that I came to this conclusion without reading much. True . But i can't continue to torture myself
The story overall has promise but dude the MC is a fcking dickhead for 90% of the story for absolute no reason. No wonder his irl girlfriend left him, the fact he had one is already a miracle. It's really hard to continue reading from his POV and cheering for him. It's not even he is a villain with charm, just insufferable, the kinda side character you would want the MC to bitch slap.
I’m really enjoying reading this novel so far .
This novel was rather interesting. I was at first very put out by the MCs attitude throughout but came to understand a bit more as I read on in the novel. The parts that I disliked was the very descriptive torture scenes which made me wonder if this was the authors personal fetish, as it was overly intense. Anyways, I have read everything up to the current chapter I am at, I recall swearing not to purchase any more chapters but the author would release something that would cause me to purchase the chapter ahead in the want to know more, which is really a first for me in a long time. Overall it is a rather meticulously written novel, it captures many elements that a Novel should have and delivers these. As I mentioned above, the one retraction was the vivid torture scenes and I firmly believe that they could have been delivered in a more constructive manner… Just thinking now. I feel somehow the novels title should be different, as he is really more the villain than his wife to be is. After all he is armed with knowledge of the story and has actively taken away all the good things to be discovered by the protagonist and removed threats before they became serious threats with utter ruthlessness, so yeh maybe a different title. To sum up.. it ain’t bad !
Sorry to say this, but the story is a bit wierd, same with the main character, not in any world will he survive with his mouth.
im caught up to the free chapters of so many novels and i love yours. really fun
The premise is great. I love the idea and the world building but... what is that character? i dont mind hating a MC but why does he try to make enemies when he's trying not to be killed by them? He's just plainly stupid, not even a villain...
I like this. I wanted to get into a villain type mc again and this is really nice. Mc isn’t annoying and just does what is needed. Personality is also funny and the fight club reference was funny.
It has a story that gets better and better, even if I had a little difficulty reading it at the beginning. I would be happy if only the harem parts do not increase too much. Great job author!