Wish: Into the world of Percy Jackson
An unsatisfied young man participates in a really questionable survey, that would forever change his life.
"What world would I like to live? How about the Percy Jackson world?"
"My objective? Overpowering the primordials doesn't sound half bad!"
"What would I use to do that? Some talent while having no limits would be great!"
"Is that my wish?"
Did his wish come true?
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This is my first time writing a novel, so I was a little confused on what to do in the first few chapters, and for that I can only ask for you guys to bear with me, as I am trying to improve.
Also, just like the tags implies, I planned for this to be a harem story, so don't be too surprised when something related to that happens.
By the way, I'm not a native english speaker, so I'm trying my best to make things right, but you are all free to help me correcting any mistakes that make their way past me! I won't ever learn if you guys don't say anything!
Great story keep it up you should add a picture so more people will be attracted to your story I recommend alexandra daddario since she played annebeth in the movies
Changing preexisting character to suit your needs Wants to make a harem Dumbs down characters heavily Zzzzzzzzzzzzz-zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
The harem sucks and the personality changes you made to several characters are horrible.ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
It is actually pretty good I just hope it does not get dropped like alot of other Percy Jackson books on here [img=update][img=update][img=update]
good so far afew things to work on but its better than 70-75% of fan-fiction on here .....................................................................
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This story is pretty great, the pace is a bit slow but not to much, you feel like the story is progressing but the author is taking his time developing the caracters (which is the right call in my opnion since is just the begging of the story). The MC power is nice, not too OP but with limitless potencial (hehe saw what I did there?). While I'm making this review there is only 21 chapters soo is hard to say more. I like it, I would recommend to read the first 3 or 5 chapters, if the humor and storing telling didn't work for you by then this story is probably not for you.
Esta historia es muy entretenida, me ha gustado mucho como se ha ido desarrollando, espero que no decaíga en calidad y lo unico que queda por decir es ánimo,
just because I haven't seen much pjo fics.....