Good story have good plot very intriguing .
Recommend to other readers .
8 months ago
3
NaomiAbu
Good plot and good storyline indeed. I like the way the dialogue flows so well and so naturally. I did notice some grammatical errors here and there. But overall, this is a good story and I love it!❤ Would be back to read moree when new chapters come out.
8 months ago
2
Aurimas_Pazikas
The story is intriguing and fun, I'm only a few chapters in, but I enjoy reading it. The grammar needs improvement, but plot makes up for it. Good read, I'd highly recommend
8 months ago
2
PhoenixMoh
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8 months ago
1
Noveleye
Nice novel. Intricate characters and stuffs. A really nice book for the family. The descriptions need some work and the usage of words though but overall, it's great. Keep up the work author
Good story have good plot very intriguing . Recommend to other readers .
Good plot and good storyline indeed. I like the way the dialogue flows so well and so naturally. I did notice some grammatical errors here and there. But overall, this is a good story and I love it!❤ Would be back to read moree when new chapters come out.
The story is intriguing and fun, I'm only a few chapters in, but I enjoy reading it. The grammar needs improvement, but plot makes up for it. Good read, I'd highly recommend
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Nice novel. Intricate characters and stuffs. A really nice book for the family. The descriptions need some work and the usage of words though but overall, it's great. Keep up the work author