The Ascendant Mortal: Beyond Divine Boundaries
In a world overrun by monstrous beasts impervious to magic and military might, humanity teeters on the brink of extinction. Desperation to survive awakened a hidden potential within humans—mutations that unlocked a strange, untapped energy. With this newfound power, the remnants of civilization began to fight back, carving out fragile havens amidst the chaos, divided into twelve nations.
Amid this struggle, 15-year-old Aamir Singh, an unassuming but fiercely determined warrior-in-training, steps onto the stage of destiny. Haunted by the fear of loosing his family and driven by an unwavering desire to protect others, Aamir embarks on a journey that will test his courage and unravel the secrets of his past. Alongside Riya, a brilliant and enigmatic magic user, and a diverse band of allies, Aamir faces relentless beasts and uncovers darker forces manipulating the world’s downfall.
As ancient prophecies resurface and hidden truths about his heritage come to light, Aamir must harness the strange energy within him to turn the tide of destruction. In a battle against time, treachery, and the shadows threatening to engulf their world, Aamir becomes a beacon of hope.
Will he rise as the savior humanity desperately needs, or will the darkness within and around him consume everything? His journey will decide the fate of nations, the survival of mankind, and the enduring strength of the human spirit.
The story is very ambitious but I will give credit where credit is due and the direction is going fairly well so i give prob to that But the story is going on a neck-breaking speed, is not giving enough time for the reader to be immense into the world and character, i hope there's some breathing room in between. overall solid story
I like how, you write your plot. I like your characters. And I am in love with your writing style. I think I need to read more about your work. I love everything about this book.
I initially tried reading, but I didn't expect each chapter to be interesting. This is highly recommended, keep it up, Author!
Epic fights, deep lore, and apocalyptic stakes, this book delivers! Aamir Singh unlocks hidden powers while facing dark forces threatening humanity. The world-building is immersive, and the action is top-tier. The X-Men-style mutations add a cool twist, and Aamir’s dynamic with Riya is fun. A bit dramatic at times, but the cliffhangers hurt in the best way. Final verdict? If you love high-stakes fantasy with a slow-burn hero’s journey, this one’s a must-read! 🚀🔥
Amazing and interesting 😍😍 highly recommend
very good novel bro, its a very interesting, the events and the characters are nice
Okay ❤️love the setting, the plot, the MC, I'm a fan of war 😂only in novels though so chapter one is really peak keep it up.
Brother this is wild,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, You got me hooked,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Your novel has potential,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
I have read few chapters, and I know where the storyline leaning towards. I hope the characters will do good with improvements as well! Over all, It’s enjoyable!
Very good novel, the events are interesting, but the description is a bit weak, and the pace of the story is very fast, so I hope the author will slow down a bit.
The story is good the character design is good but you can improve tham can't say about word building because it's only chapter but i think it will be great and you can improve this too the idea of adrenaline rush is good it's unique and make sense overall good start keep it up👍
"Love where this fantasy novel is headed! The first two chapters have drawn me in with their engaging characters, immersive world-building, and intriguing plot. The writing is descriptive and easy to follow, making it hard to put down. I appreciate the unique twists on classic fantasy elements. Looking forward to seeing how the story unfolds. Some areas for improvement: - Pacing could be tightened - Character development could be deeper - Conflict escalation would add tension Overall, great start! Excited to read more. Keep up the good work! 3.t/5 stars.
very nice plot good writing and a decent storyline, well done!
I started reading and it's quite captivating, keep it up it's good work
Great story....Made me hooked first time i read it