The rain hammered against the windows of Marie's small apartment in Brussels, each drop sounding like a tiny fist against the glass. Outside, the city grumbled with the sounds of evening, the low thrum of traffic and distant sirens.
Inside, Marie, 51 years young with a life etched into the lines around her kind eyes, sat by the window, a mug of chamomile tea warming her hands.
She watched the street below, the blurry lights of passing cars painting streaks across the wet asphalt.
A young man hurried by, head down against the rain, his shoulders hunched as if carrying a weight unseen. Marie felt a familiar pang of compassion. Life, she knew, could be a heavy burden.
It had been a difficult day at the community center where she volunteered. Funding cuts meant they were facing reduced hours and fewer resources. Marie had spent the afternoon consoling a distraught mother who was about to lose her childcare assistance, a program the center provided. The injustice of it all sat like a stone in Marie's stomach.
Despite her own worries, she always found solace in helping others. It was how she was made, woven into the very fabric of her being. Even when life threw its curveballs, and it often did, Marie found a strange sort of peace in acts of kindness, however small.
Tonight, however, a subtle disquiet gnawed at her, something she couldn't quite place. It wasn't the usual anxieties of daily life; this was different, colder, like a draft from a door left ajar in a house you thought was sealed tight.
She finished her tea, the warmth doing little to dispel the chill that had settled over her. Closing the curtains against the deepening night, she moved to her small kitchen to prepare a simple supper.
The building itself was old, the kind that creaked and groaned with the settling of age, but tonight, the noises seemed amplified, each pop and sigh resonating with that nameless unease.
As she chopped vegetables for a soup, a tremor ran through the floor beneath her feet. It was faint, barely perceptible, like a distant rumble of thunder too far off to be of concern. She paused, knife suspended over a carrot, listening. Silence returned, broken only by the steady drumming of the rain.
"Just the building settling," she muttered to herself, trying to dismiss the feeling. Old buildings did that, she knew. But the feeling lingered, a prickle of unease on the back of her neck.
She continued preparing her meal, trying to focus on the task at hand, to ignore the subtle unease that threatened to blossom into full-blown anxiety. She turned on the radio, hoping the sound of music would fill the apartment and chase away the shadows gathering at the edges of her awareness.
A classical piece played, something somber and low, doing little to lift her mood. She switched stations, landing on a talk show discussing current events – grim news about global instability and social unrest. Marie sighed. The world felt heavy tonight, not just outside her window, but everywhere.
Another tremor, this time stronger, rattled the dishes in the drying rack. It wasn't thunder. This was closer, beneath her, within the very structure of the building. The floor vibrated for a moment, then stilled. The music on the radio seemed to falter for a fraction of a second, then returned, unbroken.
Marie stood frozen, her heart beginning to thump a heavy beat against her ribs. Fear, cold and sharp, replaced the earlier unease. Something wasn't right. This was more than just an old building settling. This was something else.
She moved away from the kitchen, drawn back to the window, peering out into the rain-swept street. Nothing looked different.
Cars still passed, streetlights still glowed, the rain still fell with relentless force. Yet, the air itself felt different, charged with a strange energy, a tension that stretched taut between the buildings.
Suddenly, the lights flickered, plunging her apartment into near darkness for a breath, before snapping back on, brighter than before. The radio sputtered, then died, leaving silence in its wake, a silence that felt heavy, pregnant with anticipation.
Marie stood in the center of her living room, listening, straining her ears for any sound that might explain what was happening. The only sound was the rain, now seeming to beat harder, faster against the glass.
And beneath it, a low, almost subsonic rumble, a vibration that resonated not just in her ears but in her very bones.
The tremor returned, stronger still, shaking the floorboards with a palpable force. A vase on a nearby table rattled precariously. Marie instinctively reached out to steady it, her hand trembling slightly.
This was not natural. This was not a building settling. This was something… else.
She remembered a story, a hushed tale from her grandmother, told in low tones on stormy nights when the wind howled outside and the old house creaked around them. A story of something ancient, something that watched, something that punished.
A story of "The One Who Shakes." Marie had dismissed it then as just an old wives' tale, a way to frighten children. But now, the memory surfaced, unbidden and chillingly relevant.
The rumble intensified, growing louder, deeper, the vibrations becoming violent. The walls seemed to groan, the ceiling to sag. The apartment was shaking, not gently, but violently, as if in the grip of some immense, unseen force.
Fear gave way to panic. Marie backed away from the shaking walls, her eyes darting around the room, searching for an escape, for understanding. What was happening? Why was this happening?
Then, she remembered. The childcare assistance. The distraught mother. Marie had not just offered words of comfort; she had promised to personally appeal to the city council, to fight for the funding, to make sure that mother didn't lose her support. It was a small thing, perhaps, in the grand scheme of things, but it was a righteous thing. A good deed.
A cold dread washed over her, colder than the fear, a chilling understanding. The stories… they weren't just stories. "The One Who Shakes"... it punished righteousness. It punished good deeds. And she… she had done a good deed today.
The shaking intensified again, reaching a fever pitch. Objects rattled off shelves, pictures fell from the walls, the very structure of the apartment seemed to be tearing itself apart. The air crackled with an unseen energy, the smell of ozone sharp in her nostrils.
Marie cried out, a sound swallowed by the growing roar. She stumbled, falling to her knees as the floor bucked and swayed beneath her. She could feel the vibrations rising up through her body, into her bones, into her very soul. It felt as if the world itself was tearing apart around her.
She closed her eyes, bracing for the worst, a desperate prayer forming on her lips. But it wasn't a prayer for safety, not anymore. In that moment of terrifying clarity, Marie understood. There was no escape. There was no safety. Her act of kindness, her small spark of righteousness, had drawn this upon her.
The shaking stopped. Just as suddenly as it had begun, the violent tremors ceased. Silence descended, a thick, oppressive silence that was almost worse than the chaos that preceded it. The rain still beat against the windows, but now it sounded different, softer, almost mocking.
Marie slowly opened her eyes. The apartment was a mess. Furniture overturned, objects scattered, plaster cracked and fallen from the walls. But the building was still standing. She was still alive.
Relief flooded her, weak and shaky. Had it stopped? Was it over? Had she somehow survived?
She pushed herself up, her limbs trembling, her body aching from the relentless vibrations. She looked around the ravaged apartment, a scene of minor devastation. It was bad, but it could have been so much worse.
Then, she saw it. In the center of the living room, where the shaking had been most intense, a crack had appeared in the floorboards. Not just a small crack, but a wide, jagged fissure that split the wood asunder, revealing the darkness beneath.
From the crack, a faint glow emanated, a sickly green light that pulsed with a slow, rhythmic beat. And with it came a sound, a low, wet gurgling, like something immense and obscene stirring in the darkness below.
Marie froze, the relief evaporating, replaced by a new, deeper terror. This wasn't over. This was just beginning.
The gurgling grew louder, closer. The green glow intensified, spreading, illuminating the edges of the crack. The air grew heavy, thick with a suffocating pressure, making it hard to breathe.
A tendril of darkness, blacker than the night, writhed up from the fissure, coiling and twisting like a living thing. It pulsed with the same sickly green light, its tip splitting open to reveal rows of needle-sharp teeth, dripping with a viscous fluid.
Marie screamed, a raw, primal sound of pure terror. She backed away, stumbling, falling against the overturned sofa. The tendril snaked out further, extending towards her, its movements deliberate, hungry.
"No…" she choked out, her voice barely a whisper. "Please… no…"
It didn't stop. It didn't falter. It continued its relentless advance, drawn to her, to the source of righteousness that had called it forth. It was the punishment, inevitable and inescapable.
The tendril reached her, coiling around her leg, its grip tightening, sharp teeth pricking through her clothes, drawing blood. Marie screamed again, louder this time, a desperate, agonizing cry that echoed in the ruined apartment, lost in the storm.
She clawed at the tendril, her fingers scrabbling uselessly against its slick, cold surface. It began to pull her, dragging her towards the fissure, towards the darkness below, towards the source of the gurgling, hungry sound.
"Why?" she sobbed, tears streaming down her face, mingling with the rain that still lashed against the windows. "Why me? I only wanted to help…"
The tendril tightened its grip, dragging her closer to the crack. She could see down into the fissure now, into a black abyss that seemed to stretch into infinity, filled with the pulsing green light and the wet, hungry sounds.
A voice, not spoken aloud but planted directly into her mind, cold and devoid of all emotion, answered her despairing question.
Righteousness is a disease. Kindness is a weakness. You are cleansed.
And then, Marie was pulled down into the crack, into the darkness, into the waiting maw of "The One Who Shakes." Her screams were abruptly cut short, swallowed by the abyss. The gurgling intensified for a moment, then subsided.
The green glow faded, the tendril retracted, and the crack in the floorboards slowly, silently, closed itself up, leaving no trace of what had just transpired. The apartment was still a wreck, but the air felt different, cleaner, purged. The oppressive weight was gone.
Outside, the rain began to ease, the first hints of dawn coloring the eastern sky. The city would soon awaken, oblivious to the small tragedy that had unfolded in the quiet apartment.
No one would know what had happened to Marie, the kind woman from Belgium who had only wanted to help. She had simply vanished, erased, punished for her virtue.
In the world of "The One Who Shakes," righteousness was not rewarded; it was extinguished. And kindness… kindness was a fatal flaw.