The salt-laced wind carried whispers of change long before anything could be seen. Twenty-one years of island life had ingrained in Kiran a deep sensitivity to the subtle shifts in the weather, the ocean, the very feel of the world around him.
This morning, though, it wasn't the familiar push and pull of the tides or the predictable shift in the monsoon winds. It was something else, a wrongness that prickled at his skin as he cast his fishing nets just off the coast of Mahé.
The sun, usually a reliable companion, felt muted, its light struggling to break through a strange, deepening haze to the east. Kiran initially dismissed it as an unusual fog bank, perhaps pushed in by an errant current.
He'd seen odd weather patterns before, quick squalls that blew in and out within an hour, leaving the world washed clean and gleaming. This felt different, heavy and expectant.
He hauled in his first net, a meager catch of small reef fish, their scales duller than usual. Even the vibrant colours of the parrotfish seemed subdued, as if the light itself was being leached away. Kiran frowned, his unease growing.
The fishermen around him, usually a boisterous bunch, were quieter than normal, their voices subdued, their movements less animated.
"Something feels off, eh, Kiran?" old Manikam grumbled, his voice raspy from years of sun and salt. He was mending his nets with thick, calloused fingers, his brow furrowed as he kept glancing towards the horizon.
Kiran nodded, pulling his own net further onto the small boat. "The light... it's not right. And the air feels heavy."
Manikam spat into the water, a dark stream against the turquoise. "Heavier than just humidity, boy. Feels like… waiting."
They worked in silence for a while, the only sounds the gentle lapping of waves against their boats and the distant cries of seabirds. But even the birds seemed less enthusiastic, their calls lacking their usual sharpness.
Kiran found himself constantly glancing east, drawn to the darkening smudge on the horizon that was no ordinary fog.
It wasn't moving like fog. It wasn't dissipating or shifting with the wind. Instead, it seemed to be growing, a slow, inexorable expansion of darkness creeping across the sky.
The light continued to dim, the colours of the island landscape becoming muted, washed out, as if viewed through a charcoal filter.
Panic started to prickle at the edges of Kiran's composure. He'd faced storms at sea, dealt with gear failures, even a close call with a shark once.
This was unlike anything he had encountered. This wasn't a storm of wind and water; this felt like something swallowing the very essence of the day.
He reeled in his last net, barely noticing the meagre catch. "We should head back," Kiran said, his voice tighter than he intended. "Something isn't right out there."
Manikam looked at him, his ancient eyes filled with a weary acceptance that chilled Kiran to the bone. "Back to what, boy?"
He gestured with a gnarled hand towards the encroaching darkness. "You think land will be any different?"
The question hung heavy in the still air. Kiran didn't have an answer. He just felt the growing dread, a cold knot tightening in his stomach as he stared at the blackness that was now visibly larger, closer.
It was no longer a smudge on the horizon; it was a wall, a curtain of absolute dark rolling towards them.
They started their engines, the small motors sputtering to life, breaking the unnatural quiet. The other fishermen, sensing the shift in mood, also began to pull up their lines and turn their boats towards the shore.
A silent, unspoken agreement passed between them, a primal understanding that something terrible was approaching.
As they sped towards land, the darkness accelerated. It was as if it had been patiently waiting, and now, given the signal, it surged forward movement.
The sky above us, once a brilliant blue, was being devoured by this encroaching blackness. The sun vanished completely, swallowed whole by the cloud.
Day turned abruptly into twilight, then into a premature night. But it wasn't the gentle fading of evening.
This was an active extinguishing, a forceful removal of light. A chilling, unnatural gloom descended, thick and oppressive.
They reached the shore, the small fishing boats bumping against the sand. The beach, usually vibrant with life, was deserted.
The usual beach vendors were gone, the tourists vanished. An unsettling stillness had fallen over the island. Only the sound of the waves remained, now muted, swallowed by the suffocating darkness.
Kiran jumped out of his boat, his legs feeling shaky. He looked around for his family's small beachfront shop, a brightly painted stall where they sold trinkets and cold drinks to tourists.
It was there, but shuttered and silent.
He ran towards it, his heart pounding. "Mama? Papa?" he called out, his voice cracking in the unnatural dimness.
The shop door creaked open, and his mother emerged, her face pale and etched with worry. His younger sister, Nima, clung to her skirt, her eyes wide and scared.
"Kiran! You're back," his mother said, her voice strained. "Did you see it? What is it?"
"It's… I don't know, Mama," Kiran admitted, feeling a wave of helplessness wash over him. He was supposed to be the strong one, the man of the family when his father was out on longer fishing trips.
Now, he felt lost, adrift in this sudden, terrifying change.
His father appeared behind his mother, his face grim. "Something is happening. The radio is dead. No phone signal either. It's like the world has gone silent."
They huddled together, staring out at the encroaching blackness. People started to emerge from their homes, drawn by the unnatural darkness, their faces etched with confusion and fear.
Whispers circulated, questions unanswered, anxieties growing.
"Is it a storm? But there's no wind," someone murmured.
"It's like… like the night itself is coming to eat the day," another voice whispered, fear lacing the words.
The darkness continued its relentless advance. It wasn't just dimming the light; it felt like it was absorbing everything, sound, colour, even warmth.
A chilling cold started to seep into the air, despite the tropical humidity.
As the cloud reached the edge of the island, an unnatural silence descended. The waves still lapped against the shore, but their sound was muted, as if muffled by a heavy blanket.
The seabirds were gone. Even the insects were silent. The world had become eerily, terrifyingly quiet.
Then, the darkness arrived. It wasn't a sudden rush, but a slow, deliberate motion engulfment.
It crept over the land, swallowing everything in its path. Houses, trees, the beach, people – all vanished into the inky blackness.
Kiran stood with his family, watching as their vibrant world was consumed. He could feel the cold touch of the darkness, a physical sensation that was more than just the absence of light.
It felt like the absence of everything, of hope, of life itself.
"Papa, I'm scared," Nima whispered, her small voice trembling.
His father pulled her closer, his arm around his wife as well. "It will be alright, little one. We are together."
But his voice lacked conviction. Kiran could see the fear in his eyes, the same fear that was gripping his own heart.
The darkness reached them. It wasn't painful, not initially. It was like stepping into a void, a place where nothing existed.
The colours of their clothes faded, the warmth of their bodies seemed to dissipate. The world around them dissolved into absolute nothingness.
Kiran could still see his family, dimly, their faces pale outlines in the encroaching black. He could feel their hands, cold and clammy in his.
They were still there, but the world they knew, the vibrant, colourful island life, was gone, swallowed by the cloud.
They stood in the darkness, surrounded by nothingness. Time ceased to have meaning. Sounds faded away completely.
It was just them, and the endless, suffocating black. Kiran tried to speak, but no sound came out. His voice was gone, absorbed by the silence.
He looked at his mother, her eyes wide with terror, then at his father, his face a mask of grim acceptance. He looked at Nima, her small form trembling beside them.
He wanted to say something, anything, to reassure them, to tell them it would be okay. But the words wouldn't come.
The darkness deepened, becoming more intense, more absolute. Even the faint outlines of his family started to fade.
He could feel their hands slipping from his, their presence becoming less tangible. The cold intensified, seeping into his bones, numbing him, silencing him.
Panic clawed at his throat, a silent scream trapped within the void. He reached out blindly, trying to grasp his family, to hold onto something, anything, to stop them from being swallowed completely.
But there was nothing to hold onto. The darkness was all-encompassing, an insatiable void consuming everything.
His family was fading, dissolving into the black, becoming one with the nothingness.
He was alone. Utterly, completely alone. Surrounded by nothing, enveloped by nothing, becoming nothing.
The darkness pressed in on him, a crushing weight that stole his breath, his thoughts, his very being.
Then, even the dim outlines of his own hands disappeared. His body ceased to exist, his senses faded, his consciousness dissolved.
There was no pain, no struggle, just an absolute, silent cessation.
The black cloud had consumed everything. The island, the world, and Kiran, along with his family, were gone.
Reduced to nothing, absorbed into the void. The world was silent, empty, and utterly, irrevocably dark.
There was no struggle, no heroic last stand, no glimmer of hope. Just the cold, absolute certainty of oblivion.
And in that oblivion, in the vast, empty darkness, Kiran's unique sadness was not a grand, dramatic tragedy. It was the quiet, personal erasure of a life that had just begun, a life full of the simple joys of sun, sea, and family, now extinguished without a sound, without a trace.
His particular sorrow was the absence of even a memory, the unrecorded vanishing of a single soul in the face of an uncaring, consuming darkness, a testament to the brutal indifference of a world that could be swallowed whole and leave no echo behind.