Harry Potter: Archmage of Another World

Translation is good, MC hasn't changed anything in the original HP fanfic at all. Basically he just hops in and does everything for them. as of now it's the start of the 3rd year. Story doesn't go into the magic system all that much. Not much Chinese propaganda here, but there is some. Try to be mysterious about MCs abilities which is annoying because I want more detail on how he uses his magic

The start was excellent. The characters flushed out and interesting. However, the story has taken a huge dip in story quality since the dimensional game travellers from the far East appeared. It has declined to the point that I decided to drop the story once the MC started sending the other students to different planets in his flying tower. (sounds like a fever dream). It's a classic case of self sabotage, unfortunately, trying to turn a story into a multiversal one when the end of the story is approaching. Probably to try and stretch it out.

The Mc reminds me of Howl from Howl’s moving castle, it’s an old animation movie that’s very popular. Augustus the Mc is similar to Quinn West from HP: Magical Journey fanfic. Where they pursuit magic and knowledge above everything else. Mc doesn’t have any knowledge of the HP world and MC doesn’t care to intervene with the plot that doesn’t involve him directly. He gives advice to other main characters so you can say he’s a background character to the story but it’s only like this from the start. This fanfic is for the long run and it’s a refreshing to have an Mc that doesn’t see the world black or white good or evil. Hopefully my expectations are kept and hopefully as the stroy continues we learn more of our MC.

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I love the different magic system introduced here… I always wondered why elemental magic is not used frequently in Harry Potter. This just provides me that satisfaction.

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The story is progressing nicely until the "delegate from the east" arrived, thoroughly disrupting the flow of the story. The character's personality seemed to have changed abruptly, shattering the already established plot of the story. The notion for this change to be a plot twist is not going nicely. And the perspective and style of the writing has changed from a british one to a more chinese one, evidenced by the transition from a calculative thoughts of the characters to a more rash and brazen actions and thoughts of the characters. All in all this is still an ok story and I'll update this review more as I progress in the story.

The story is good but the chapters are shorts and i feel like it lacks characters development.

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The story is decent but it has 3 main problems that make it near unreadable. -Firstly it has been dropped on a cliffhanger so there will be no satisfying ending. -Most importantly to me, Evan though it has a villain tag the entire personality of the MC is that he has noble morals and admonishes anyone who doesn't. -At a certain point towards the end the entire concept and genre of the story changes abruptly and then the story ends without any clarification The story could have been good but was misleading and didn't follow through.