Inertia: Beneath the Starlit Veil

Came from tiktok as a big fan of this guy, read the novel and as a guy who's been writing novels here for almost an year now, I can definitely say this is better than 80% of what this platform has to offer, a very good job at it. Something I would say not as a criticism but as an advice from someone who's experienced on this platform, is the title. It isn't bad. It's actually quite good. Though WN favors clickbait titles like I'm the strongest and others so that's that. Besides that, great job fr

Just wow. has so much potential I’m so excited for you keep up the good work and just enjoy

even though this is a new novel, let the author write ✍️ more and a chance to develop his story to great piece of fiction

Man the introduction kept me interested, the mc is already goated asl, this novel has alot of potential and i look forward to seeing how the world building will look and the side cast. Keep up the work gng

W start it feels like Cyrus might have an inner demon or alternate personality based on that 3rd chapter conclusion love the work

I really like the story and has the power system slowly start, I think there's a lot of room for it to be a great work.😁 I came from tiktok and it's my second time reading a novel, so I expect a lot out of this story. hope there will be a webtoon soon, in like 1 or 2 year's !!

The story so far has been a blast. The story is paced very well and has a great style. The characters have a lot of personality and are easy to like. The world already shows much promise and feels like it's going to be one for the times. Then there's the power or magic system which has a fun premise to it. Unfortunately the story just started so there's not too much to say, but from the little we got, I can already tell this will be great, and I have high hopes for it. The best of luck to the author, and keep up the good work. When it has more chapters, I'll make an actual in-depth review, but so far 6 chapters in this has been my first impression.

As soon as i saw first chapter i said hold up this is good. Every chapter is better then previous one! Keep it up!

Overall a very interesting read. I’m ready for the journey of following this series every week!

This my first light novel since like middle school. I’m excited to get back to it. Ima give an update after I read these. Regardless i fw yo content, black voices to the manhwa/lightnovel/webtoon/manga verse is always appreciated.

Ima big fan of your tog post's also goodluck man

From what we got it is a really interesting idea but the writing needs to improve, i don't mean this in a bad way for example you use the same words a lot of times like I , I said ,I thought you could next time use stuff like as i said, thinking to my self, doing so basically try and use different words. The second issue was you don't let us find stuff for ourselves for example when Cyrus's dad tanked the fire ball and said "I'm immune" it sounded dry and boring try only hint that he has those abilities aside from these issues it's really good 👍

I am a huge Fan of the creator on Tiktok and other plattforms and I'm happy to see how this is going, definetly has big potential this could be a amazing ride and im all down for it 🙏

I will be real, getting here I came with no expectations in mind but The First 3 Chap had me in a Necklock, bed-shooking position. I already Love Cyrus’s character, The world Building is Fresh (I mean the idea) we haven’t had this type of novels in a while around here. The execution so far is Chef Kiss. I can sense The Author’s taste being tinged by other Novels like SS, LOTM, TBATE , etc, which adds a rich and Refreshing feel to the story and the way it was executed. So far soo good and it has mad potential, I wish all the best for the Author. S/N: THE COMMUNITY DEMANDS A DISCORD SERVER FOR INTERACTIONS WITH THE AUTHOR. (The Link in the T app has expired quite a while ago now, although I think you have already taken it down.)