NARUTO SI: A Burdened Soul (Elder Brother to Itachi SI)

I really this fanfic, I will talk about good parts first - mc is fairly powerful but not op, story focuses on other characters too which is good, you haven't weakened other characters like Minato, jiraya and fugaku which I really love. The overall pace is also good. I really look forward to mc character going forward, I hope he doesn't not stay this sullen forever. plus don't make it a harem please and don't make mc too op too soon otherwise the story will lose the seriousness in my opinion, so keep him fairly powerful going forward but not op. thanks really looking forward to read more.

One of the best Naruto fanfics I've read. All the characters are well-written and have character. The world-building and story progression are very good. Not everyone in the village is evil, but many make human, bad decisions. The only downside to the fanfic is the main character. More precisely, his development. It is very subtle and a little unclear. For example, I was only convinced in chapter 35 that he is a reincarnator. The biggest minus for me is with the disclosure of the main character's power. For example, he awakened the Mangekyou Sharingan, but not a word was said about his blindness and the search for a solution to this. How the jutsu he developed work and how exactly he created them are not revealed. Also, the mechanics of chakra itself in the world of fan fiction are not told - everything is quiet about the transformations of nature (Yin Yang and the elements).

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Sounds like a promising story can’t wait to see what happens with this story!

discovered the story in FF, i'm glad to see it uploaded here, much easier to keep track of the updates the story was well written, though I hope author be bolder in writing their own plot rather than minor changes to canon events

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