Omniscient Blade

Omniscient Blade

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"Omniscient Blade"



In his past life, Ryuujin Kurogami was a genius of physics and mathematics, but his brilliance brought him nothing but pain. Bullied, betrayed, and eventually killed by his peers, he died a powerless man, haunted by his inability to fight back.



Now reborn in a new world as the youngest member of the prestigious Kurogami Clan, Ryuujin is determined to rewrite his destiny. But life in the clan is harsh, and his inability to grasp their martial techniques leaves him an outcast, ridiculed and humiliated by his own blood.



Fate changes when Ryuujin discovers an ancient cave filled with sword marks left by the clan’s legendary founder—a man who, like Ryuujin, came from another world. Using his knowledge of physics, Ryuujin deciphers the marks and begins to forge his own path, blending science with martial arts. This discovery unlocks the *Omni Eye*, an extraordinary ability that allows him to analyze and counter any technique.



With this newfound power, Ryuujin dominates his peers, earning respect and sparking rumors of his unparalleled strength. But when pressured to attend the prestigious royal academy, he defies expectations and embarks on a journey of self-discovery instead. Along the way, he masters various weapons—katanas, daggers, whips, and projectiles—and learns to adapt his techniques to counter even the strongest foes.



However, Ryuujin’s path is far from easy. The world is rife with challenges: dangerous beasts, rival clans, and mysterious villains with tragic pasts. Among them is a shadowy mastermind whose manipulations tie back to Ryuujin's first life, forcing him to confront his buried trauma.



As Ryuujin grows stronger, he forges his ultimate weapon, the *Backhand Blade*, a masterpiece crafted by a legendary blacksmith. This weapon evolves alongside him, symbolizing his relentless pursuit of perfection. Yet, Ryuujin’s greatest battles are not just against enemies but against the limitations of his own body and the lingering scars of his past.



Through relentless battles, emotional confrontations, and complex alliances, Ryuujin rises to become a warrior feared and respected across the land. But as secrets of his rebirth and the origins of his powers come to light, Ryuujin must face the ultimate question: Is strength alone enough to protect what matters most?

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KeyboardWarrior401
KeyboardWarrior401

Wow, this is off to a good start! I have a feeling this could be great. The mc is cold and uses his head. It's just my cup of tee. I am waiting for the updates!

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The_Book_Critic
The_Book_Critic

Alright to be brutally honest here's what I think Firstly I understand you probably had chatgpt or another AI book writing app to help improve writing clarity in your chapters however you should probably remove the sub topic like stuff u write before a segment in the chapter for example in chapter 5 "kuromoni family training grounds" " observeing the weakness" in my opinion those things cause a bridge in reading Secondly I think the pacing is really off, to go more on that I believe in some parts which should have been spaced more were spaced less and some parts which should be been spaced less were space more which kind of messed up the book spacing— if you are using an Ai writing platform to aid you as i suspected I suggest you try asking them to help you write in segments and not the whole thing at once as it would probably go a long way for book pacing Thirdly some point of views would have been nice like the first chapter the boy Daiko or Daito can't remember him well seemed to bully him far to excessively for no apparent reason making it way to unrealistic considering we don't have a clue why or if he just had personality issues because in my honest opinion I feel like if an actual person was the top of the school or sum like that he probably wouldn't care much about someone like the mc tho he could still bully him it can never, in my opinion be as excessive as getting him expelled and still calling people to beat him From a book I had previously read i think it was time fist they did a good job in explaining why the protagonist was bullied as much as he was Lastly this book is probably a lot more better than i give it credit so whatever i say and rate in this throwaway comment of mine is not a theory but a personal opinion which should not affect any readers view of the book

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