THE RISE OF A HERO OR A VILLIAN/

After that incident, I couldn't get a wink of sleep. The thought that someone might come for me and my family haunted me. The idea of losing them sent chills down my spine and made me angrier. If anyone intended to hurt my family, I would rip them apart. The doctors said my mother and brother were in better condition than my father. Lisa and Seri stayed with me the whole time.

The next morning, they asked me, "What's your decision?" Normally, I would have said "no," but after everything my family went through, I was blinded by anger. "If I go with you, will I be able to control this power of mine?" I asked. They knew my anger was dangerous, but they also knew that their mission would succeed with me. With that thought, they went to make the arrangements.

I was devastated. I was just a normal guy, but all this had messed me up. The doctors told me to rest, thinking I was going through trauma, and they were right. My naps gave me goosebumps. I was scared to leave my family, especially my dad. But I had to go; it would be better for them and me since I couldn't bear to see my dad like this.

A few hours later, I got a call from an unknown number. It was Lisa. She said everything was ready and told me to say goodbye to my family. I didn't have time to think of an excuse. I went to the room where my mom and brother were admitted. Mom was glad I was alright, but she noticed something was on my mind.

"What's the matter? Is something bothering you?" she asked.

"How did you know?" I asked.

"I am your mother. If something is bothering you or your brother, I would know it," she said and asked me again.

"I... I... I..." I just couldn't say it. At that moment, Lisa and Seri entered the room. They greeted her and introduced themselves as my classmates. I pulled Seri aside and asked why they were there. She said they knew I wouldn't be able to lie about going to Seoul and came to make things easier.

Lisa told my mom that I was a bright student and had performed excellently in a certain exam, which earned me the golden opportunity to go to Seoul for higher studies. I was sure Mom wouldn't buy it, but surprisingly, she did. Lisa had a smirk on her face that clearly said, "This is how you do it," which irritated me.

After that incident, I could not get a wink of sleep. I thought that someone was coming for me and my family. The thought of losing my family gives me a chill in the spine. The very thought made me angrier. I was like if anyone intending to hurt my family came here, I would rip him apart. The doctors said my mother and brother were in better condition than my father. Lisa and Seri were there with me the whole time. The next morning both of them decided to ask me, "What's YOUR DECISION". "NO" would been my answer but after everything my family went through, I was blinded by anger. I said, " IF I GO WITH, YOU WILL I BE ABLE TO CONTROL THIS POWER OF MINE". They knew that my anger would be a great danger for them and me, but since I would be going with them their mission would be a success. With that thought, they went to make the arrangements. I was pretty devasted. I was a normal guy, but all this has pretty messed me up. The doctors told me to rest, as they thought that I would be going through trauma on they were right. The naps would have given me goosebumps. It made me scared to leave my family, especially my dad. But I had to leave, that would be better for them and me since I couldn't see my dad like this. After some hours I got a call from an unknown number. It was from Lisa. She said everything was done and said to say goodbye to my family. I didn't have time to think of any excuse. I went to the room where Mom and my brother were admitted. Mom was glad I was alright, but she noticed something was on my mind. She asked me what's the matter, is something on your mind. " HOW DID YOU KNOW?" I asked. " I AM YOUR MOTHER. IF SOMETHING IS BOTHERING YOU AND YOUR BROTHER I WOULD KNOW IT," she said and asked me again about the matter. " I... I... I" I just could not say it. That time Lisa and Seri came to the room. They both greeted her and introduced themselves as my classmates. I pulled Seri and asked her why they were there, to which she said that they knew I wouldn't be able to lie about going to SEOUL and came to make things better. Lisa told my mom that I was a bright student and during a certain exam my performance was excellent due to this I got the golden opportunity to go to SEOUL for my higher studies. I was sure Mom would buy it but surprisingly she did. Lisa had that smirk on her face which clearly said this is how you do it, which made me irritated. Mom was pleased about it but also sad, to which I said " I DON'T WANT TO GO ESPECIALLY NOW. BOTH OF YOU ARE INJURED AND DAD IS IN ICU, HOW CAN I GO AWAY? AS YOUR SON IT MY RESPONSIBILITY TO LOOK AFTER YOU, TO AFTER OUR FAMILY". To which she said that I should go. If it's about us, then I shouldn't be worried. If it had some normal circumstances, I would agreed with her but this was not normal. How could I explain to her some wicked creatures are after me and our family? No way she would take me seriously. If it had me then I wouldn't have but the things I saw and the feeling I had when I struck that creature, it was .... I just don't know how to say or feel about it anymore. Nothing is normal for me now. The only thing I want now is to control this new power and protect my family. Maybe deep down in my heart, I wanted more than that. Maybe I wanted revenge, revenge for hurting my family, revenge for snatching away my normal life. I always wanted to be a hero like a superhero saving the life and enjoying their superpowers but when you are given powers it's way too complicated. I think I understand what Peter Parker from Spiderman meant by saying " WITH GREAT POWERS, THERE MUST ALSO COME GREAT RESPONSIBILITY". It's not what your powers are or how powerful you or what your powers are it's always how you use that power. It's my and Dad’s favorite quote. Thinking all this, Mom called me. She sighed as I used to lost in my world when others were speaking. It's one of the things that I need to work on. Lisa came to the room and said we need to go. I said my goodbyes to Mom and went to the room where my brother was. How much he teases me or how much he causes me trouble, he is my little brother, and with that mindset, I entered the room where I found him sleeping. I didn't want to interrupt him (wanted to) and left the room with a note. We left for the airport and arrived around 1hr when we left the hospital. We checked in and boarded the plane and before taking off Lisa said" IF YOU WANT TO GO BACK, NOW IS THE TIME. AFTER THIS THERE IS NO TURNING BACK". I swallowed hard but I was determined. I didn't say anything but both of them understood my intention. rewrite it better

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The next morning, they asked me, "What's your decision?" Normally, I would have said "no," but after everything my family went through, I was blinded by anger. "If I go with you, will I be able to control this power of mine?" I asked. They knew my anger was dangerous, but they also knew that with me, their mission would succeed. With that thought, they went to make the arrangements.

I was devastated. I was just a normal guy, but all this had messed me up. The doctors told me to rest, thinking I was going through trauma, and they were right. My naps gave me goosebumps. I was scared to leave my family, especially my dad. But I had to leave; it would be better for them and me since I couldn't bear to see my dad like this.

"What's the matter? Is something bothering you?" she asked.

"How did you know?" I asked.

"I am your mother. If something is bothering you or your brother, I would know it," she said and asked me again about the matter.

Mom was pleased but also sad. "I don't want to go, especially now. Both of you are injured, and Dad is in the ICU. How can I leave? As your son, it's my responsibility to look after you and our family," I said.

She insisted that I should go. If it was about them, I shouldn't worry. Under normal circumstances, I would have agreed, but this was not normal. How could I explain to her that wicked creatures were after us? No way she would take me seriously. If it were just me, I wouldn't have believed it either. But the things I saw and the feeling I had when I struck that creature... I just don't know how to describe it any more. Nothing is normal for me now. The only thing I want is to control this new power and protect my family. Maybe deep down, I wanted more than that. Maybe I wanted revenge for hurting my family and for taking away my normal life.

I always wanted to be a hero, like a superhero saving lives and enjoying their powers. But when you're given powers, it's way too complicated. I think I understand what Peter Parker from Spider-Man meant by saying, "With great power, there must also come great responsibility." It's not about what your powers are or how powerful you are; it's about how you use that power. It's my and Dad's favorite quote.

Lost in thought, Mom called me. She sighed, knowing I often got lost in my world when others were speaking. It's one of the things I need to work on. Lisa came into the room and said we needed to go. I said my goodbyes to Mom and went to the room where my brother was. No matter how much he teased me or caused trouble, he was my little brother. With that mindset, I entered the room and found him sleeping. I didn't want to wake him, so I left a note and quietly left the room.

We headed to the airport and arrived about an hour after leaving the hospital. We checked in and boarded the plane. Before takeoff, Lisa said, "If you want to go back, now is the time. After this, there's no turning back." I swallowed hard but remained determined. I didn't say anything, but both of them understood my intention.

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