“We live in the era of this world where technology runs rampant, tall building and cemented roads covered the areas the was once a lush of green grass and tall trees. But still, there are those “remnants” of the past that are still lurking beyond the darkness and corners of every lively cities, away from the reach of human beings.”
Hello, author's alt account.... as of now, we already entered the second arc.. I would like to know your comments on my current work by making a review .. healthy criticisms will be appreciated... thanks
it is a great story, I love the character and i love how the story starts at high intensity, good work
The story and the plot are captivating from the beginning of the book, we immerse ourselves in the story, the development and the description of the world remain points to be improved.
The concept of this story is cool and very different, after reading the first chapter I'm definitely hooked. only downside is that it need more chapters lol. great read
Is it just me or the story is easy to understand. The narration is not as elegant as others, but the story made an attachment to me, as if Im'ma part of the story. Good work author, I'm rooting for hi one
I love the pacing of the book. I'm just on the first chapter but the opening hooked me. the way it goes straight to the point without info dumping. I love your writing style too, it's very easy to paint a mental picture while reading. I'd love to see the direction the book takes
I really love this novel. It's has an amazing start and the characters add amazing too. I think the author did a great job writing the novel ,writing style is nice too[img=update][img=update][img=update]
Wow, I really love this novel, I can't seem to put it down, the pacing is perfect, and the fight scenes, omg Captivate me, I highly recommend this book.
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BANGGG! The fight scene for chapter 2 is such a banger... even if the narration is First pov, didn't expect it to be this good...
The story introduction is very good!! I thought of the mc with a cold dark manipulator vibes. But I hope the next chapter would be updated as soon as possible to complete the story intro.