The Do-Over System:My Beloved is the Villain!
Aeliana Faelith is a Elven princess, battle-harden mage that is in a losing duel with hands of Lucian Valtheris—the Demon Lord and the man she once loved. But just before death claims her, He confesses her love—and takes his own life for her. In regret and pain, Aeliana screams for a second chance to save her beloved and restart their destined fate.
The screen turns white, The Do-Over System grants her plea, She is then thrown back to the past, armed with her recent memories—of betrayal and heartbreak. Her mission is crystal clear: Stop Lucian before he becomes the monster she once faced.
With multiple attempts on different timelines, The Do-Over System makes her choose one and that will be her final attempt and the Do-Over System will self-destruct permanently leaving her in the current timeline. She chooses a timeline out of 10 in which, she discovers she and Lucian had a child but Lucian is in a deep coma with amnesia and doesn’t know who she is—
Will Aeliana be able to choose the ‘right’ timeline or doomed to save everyone? Is the child really theirs or a miracle honed to build peace between two opposing worlds then again—What is the price for falling for the Villain?
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Not every author knows how to catch a reader's attention with just a chapter. For that,I'll applaud you author. Likwable characters, great pacing and plot. keep up with the good work![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It is a captivating and emotional tale. The story of an Elven princess trying to save her beloved Lucian is deeply moving and suspenseful. This heartfelt book is a must-read for fantasy and romance fans.
I actually nearly cried in the first chapter but think the do-over system is great . imagine if we had that. :) anyways I love you book and writing. please keep updating
This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it 👍👍
This story's really grabbed me so far. Even with just a few chapters out, it's got me hooked. The pacing is spot on, speeding up when it needs to and slowing down at just the right moments to keep things natural. If I had to find fault with anything, it'd be the tense changes that pop up now and then. But, to be fair, that's getting better as the chapters go on. Great job, keep it up!
While I do not read many transmigration novels/webnovels. I must admit that such a genre does have a very enticing premise. Since most dabble on the idea of "what if's" on account of the second chance the MC will get whether they like it or not. Thus, in my perspective, such stories should focus more on the perspective of the MC instead of the happenings of any other character. "The Do-Over System:My Beloved is the Villain!", properly uses this idea, as the story is fully told from the perspective of the MC. This leads on to create a gripping narrative that entrances the reader to invest heavily on the now troubled new life of the MC. Allowing the story to naturally transition from scene to scene seamlessly. Strangely, the first 3 chapters are riddled with a few obvious grammatical errors, but from then on until chapter 12, such error are few and far in between. Please do not allow these errors to dissuade you from reading the rest of the piece, as you will be missing out an a rich world filled with compelling characters backed up with great storytelling. I do hope the author continues to or returns to updating regularly, as it seems that there are already many who adore the story.
Just take my money 💰, anyways the author had managed to craft a super book with banger writing quality.
I really like stories with strong overpowered female leads, and this book is indeed to justice. Keep writing and upload more chapters, author.
Great plot and overall, it's a treat. The first chapter was really engaging and I hope others find it engaging as well. But there are a few errors although I don't care much about them. Keep up the work author! 👍
This is a great story! I really hope Aeliana and Lucian don’t end up ill-fated again 🥹
This is a great story. I can't stop my self giving it a five star review Quite remarkable as the story telling and the back ground is well designed. Plus, the writing style is quite simple and goes in a good flow. Great book and will surely enjoy it
The concept is interesting to say the least. And the dynamic between them is great. I'm just wondering how many tries it will take her to finally complete the system's mission. I'm guessing it'll be a lot.
Damn that was a nice story! Keep going and It will be better! I'm rooting for ya! Okay so in some parts its like a narration and sometimes its dialogue but Its good
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