Paul_Okito

"When the sky weeps and the stars vanish, the child of two bloods shall rise. And with his choice, the world shall either fall... or be reborn."

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The heavens trembled as gods waged war, shattering the balance of the world below. With Olympia in chaos, the orcs seized their chance, rising against elves, humans, and dwarves in a brutal conquest.

Amid the divine struggle, Ragon—son of Zeus and an Olympian god—found himself betrayed. Unable to overthrow Zeus, the gods turned their wrath on his demigod son, striking him down before he could ascend to true godhood. But death was not the end.

His spirit, on the brink of divinity wandered the mortal realm until it found an unlikely vessel—a slain noble child whose adopted father, an Elven overlord, had infused his body with forbidden magic, granting him  unnatural longevity. Seizing the opportunity, Ragon took over the child's body, determined to reclaim his power, defy fate, and carve his own path among gods and mortals alike.

The Noble Blood

Gwen walked away from Talon, seemingly unaffected by his words. However, Talon refused to give up so easily. Determination filled his gaze as he watched her retreating figure.

"I will do everything within my power to earn back your trust and bring you back to my side," Talon whispered to himself, his voice filled with unwavering resolve.

Meanwhile, at the arena, the judges took their positions at the judging area. This was the moment when their role as judges would truly come into play. The remaining NewBlood Initiates gathered, as the instructor assumed his customary position.

"We have now reached the mid-finals of the Enrollment Trials," the instructor announced, his voice commanding attention. "At this stage, only those that fall under the cut off range of points will be granted full admission to the school."

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Undead legion