Harry Potter and the Ambitious Girl

The most captivating Harry Potter novels, featuring an incredible cast of characters. The inclusion of an Ambitious Girl as the lead makes the story even more compelling and unforgettable. A must-read for fans of magical adventures![img=update][img=update][img=update]

One of the best novel of Harry Potter to read with amazing characters in it, must recommend Harry Potter novel with Ambitious Girl as a lead character makes it more startling ........

I can't complain, because it's a different change from typical stories and very well implemented.

This Fanfic is really good. I like the fmc so much The way the world has been made is really intersting(not predictable) And the way mc deals with the characters is truly badass. So If you want a badass fmc to make everyone kneel before her and see how she paves her path as an absolute ruler then READ IT. Also, don't worry she is op from the beginning(flashy no hiding)

One of the best fanfics I have ever read.

One of the best HP FF I've read in a long time. The MC has depth and is not just a copy paste of numerous others. Although cringe and edgy at times, it doesn't feel out of place or exaggerated. The only reason it didn't get a 5 star rating is that it needs some editing. Names are inconsistent through the story and some chapters have doubled texts.

Great fanfiction, now if only the author would stop writing duplicate paragraphs.

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A secondary thing, assembled from templates and tropes. The main character is too strong, so the author has to introduce increasingly powerful enemies just to give a sense of adequate growth. This is also a dull job, not designed for someone who can think a little. This is also fanon. Entities introduced by the author simply because he wants to. Because he cannot otherwise work with what was in the original. This is pathetic, logic is violated for the sake of fan service. Mary Sue character. One of the worst types. He never makes mistakes, never fails, everyone admires, trembles or fears him. In any case, this is an inadequate setting that stops playing after 20-30 chapters. The author is incapable of handling such characters and wastes all their potential. This is not a comedy story. There is quite a bit of humor, but there is constant pathos and tension. Moreover, if at first it is new and seems interesting, then after a while it tires and becomes insipid. There is no mind in history. If in other works the character is strong due to innovation, ingenuity, cunning or some strictly limited cheats, then this is not the case here either. The author tries to introduce drama, give the character a pitiful story, but it doesn’t work at all. You don't empathize with the character, but start to hate him. If it worked with Megatron because he had a retinue and a faction, then it doesn’t work with the character. In all this time, she has not gathered anyone who would support her ideas, and not grovel before her because of her strength. It actually devalues ​​everything. The secondary characters also have no value compared to Mary Sue. Their abilities are negligible, as is their ability to influence history. They also do not develop and simply form a mediocre and already familiar background. In other words, the author is simply ineptly using the original work to let his doll play in this sandbox. Finally, I can’t help but mention the food fetish as a way to praise the kitchen and fill in the text with water about how delicious the food is, etc. Although this is presented as a feature of the Mary Sue's character, in reality it is a common Asian trick of pouring water: food, fan service, focused on body parts or "atmosphere", aura or something similar anime. The work does not deserve the high rating it was given. In fact, this is a mediocre mix, a short story that the author could not write and turned into fan fiction that exploits the original. It could have been better if it weren't for the fanservice, power inflation, and broken logic.

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