Bleach: I Have No Talent
Shiro was an ordinary boy with no special talents who died saving a child. Reincarnated into the harsh world of Rukongai, he struggles to survive as nothing more than a powerless soul. When he joins Shin'ō Academy to change his fate, a mysterious system unlocks, granting him access to legendary anime powers—but only if he works tirelessly to earn them. Starting with the smallest spark of potential, Shiro embarks on a journey to rise in a world where only the strong can thrive, unaware of the dark ambitions of a prodigy named Aizen.
btw guys this story is au
i won't follow the Bleach story line completely.
this fanfiction was created with the help of Chat gpt
it wasnt all created by it, i just used it in some situations where i didnt quite know what to write or how to write it
The concept seems neat but it just runs into a roadblock that I have seen many times before in writing. You are trying to connect us emotionally to the character and his struggles when we don’t care about him yet. We don’t know him. So we can’t connect. At least I can’t which just makes these emotional scenes written in the first few chapters just feel weird to read.
Another MC who reincarnates and loses his memory "sigh" "sigh" "sigh" "sigh" "sigh" "sigh" "sigh" "sigh" "sigh" "sigh" "sigh" "sigh" "sigh" "sigh" "sigh" "sigh" "sigh" "sigh" "sigh" "sigh" "sigh" "sigh" "sigh" "sigh"
This is a bit hypocritical of me to make a review without much substance but the fact that this is no harem has got me interested
First of all I suggest you watch bleach or just read some main world background and mechanics from wiki ,some information for academy also ,if you don't have that much time you can also some good belach fanfic they can give you most information for the world as well as some tips for writing fanfic . If you rewrite or make some changes that are as in original bleach like in chapter 8 entrance exam you let mc fight hollow etc . Which is a huge mistake I will definitely rate this fic 4-5 star
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