Transmigrated into DxD World—Kuoh Town, Hibari Kyoya. an average student, spent 18 agonizing years in the world fully aware of the dangers, knowing he is utterly powerless in a world of gods and monsters, Until...
[Ding! Sign-In System loading… 20%… 50%… 80%… 100%.]
Destiny, it seems.. has a cruel sense of humor. A [Sign-In System], long overdue, finally bursts to life within him, offering a chance at survival, a chance at power...
[Ding! Congratulations! You have received the Rainbow-Grade Gift Bag!]
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He then started completing System's tasks, accumulating even greater rewards.
[Ding! Task completed. Reward: Perfect Rumble-Rumble Fruit (Weakness to water Removed).]
[Ding! Task completed. Congratulations to the host for obtaining the Flying Thunder God Technique!]
Please don’t give up on this one I’ve been waiting for a sign in fanfic of dxd
Not bad, mc got quite OP pretty fast, my problem with this ff are the POV and the rank of the sign in prize. The POV is strange. Somehow, Author write the MC as 'me' and 'I' even tho the POV comes from Rias or other chara. Usually an Author will write it as 'Him', 'He', or directly write the MC name, because the POV belongs to other people not the MC. Then the rank of the prize, its ok if Rokushiki belongs to white rank, but Rumble Rumble Df, Hiraishin jutsu, and Bankai Zangetsu should be rank higher. Even tho Zangetsu just a fake bankai but its still a bankai, so red or maybe black rank is better, for Rumble DF maybe a red rank and Hiraishin should be green or red, after all it's a space time jutsu. For the plot, pretty average, but not a bad one and still acceptable. Mc isn't an arrogant person, not a killing maniac mc so it is okay.
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So my biggest issue with this story is that even though it says it's a sign in system Out of the six rewards he's gotten only one of them came from a sign in the rest came from tasks And he can even get rewards from sleeping with people it's not a sign in system. Also the rewards absolutely do not match the tier that they listed. I mean they listed the perfect rumble rumble fruit as a lowest level reward On the same level as the six powers.
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First Question: Is this Harem? Second Question: Is this An Op mc that's gonna go Chinese bs? Third Question: Are there any limitations on his sign in system?
one of the best fanfiction I listen to so far kept it up U doing great job
you're doing an amazing job making this story and I hope you have a great day
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keep up the good work man im really likening this
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I like this novel very much. Thank you for updating.keep it up.👍👍👍👍👍
my only request is, could you increase the chapters a week or at least make them a little longer? Otherwise, it is perfect 🥰