Tomo was an ordinary man—until he woke up in a Fire Nation-controlled Earth Kingdom colony with crushed hands, fragmented memories, and no escape from the horrors of war. Born an earthbender, yet mysteriously gifted with airbending, he must navigate a harsh world where survival demands more than strength—it demands resolve.
This is the story of a man unshackling his limits and carving his place in a world ravaged by conflict.
So far, so good. It's pretty enjoyable. There aren't alot of good Avatar fan factions
This is a good avatar fanfic, good grammer and its a bit on the darker side of the fire nations actions but make sense it’s good so far.
Great start, written with good English and the beginnings of what seems to be very interesting plot. The theme is darker than most other atla fanfictions, which is great since it makes the war and it's effects on the world more realistic. The interactions between character feel genuine and are fairly interesting. I'm also enjoying the character development of the mc. All in all a pretty interesting story. Eagerly awaiting the development of the plot and future chapters.
It’s dark and grimy it’s soo gooddddd, not that dark but it’s pretty bloody, grammer is good, progress is good considering his situation