Two years ago, alpha baseball star Logan Whitaker left his omega mate, Noah Bennett, to chase his dreams—just as Noah’s world was falling apart.
Now, an injury sends Logan back to the small town he abandoned, and to the mate he left behind. But Noah is no longer the soft omega Logan remembers. He’s the head coach of Logan’s new team, the father of a son he never knew he had, and the cold fire in his eyes makes it clear: forgiveness is off the table.
Noah has no interest in reopening old wounds. But Logan isn’t the same selfish alpha who left, and he’s determined to win back the family he didn’t know he had.
Can two broken hearts find their way back to each other, or will Logan strike out for good?
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