Immortal System in Fantasy World

Immortal System in Fantasy World

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Author: HikaruKiki
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Every year, Roland is buried alive by his grandfather. Thanks to that, he learns how to survive being buried alive for days.

Many years later, Roland was summoned to the fantasy world with five other people, but the other five were all heroes, while he did not have any magical talent.

Roland thought he would be an ordinary person for the rest of his life, but his fiancée, because she loved one of the five heroes, cut off his limbs and buried him alive.

Luckily… he didn't die; on the contrary, he was able to activate the 'Immortal System'.

It doesn't matter if he's an ordinary person; as long as he continuously dies, he becomes stronger.

Roland, crawling out of hell, returns to take revenge on his fiancée.

At the same time, he also became the devil of this world, confronting the heroes.

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Duc_1716
Duc_1716

From the synopsis alone this story is right up my ally, but I will be honest I was not a fan of your previous work the Normal Harem one. My main criticism for that story was how shallow all the girls and side character were in general, I only liked the "green tea" girl since she atleast had her personality and her world didn't revolve around MC alone and she had her own worries, and from the review on that novel this sentiment seems to be shared. I believe the author has grown since that novel, let's make this one a topped rank novel. If I may request one thing please don't introduce to many side character at once, and spend that time giving layers to the existing ones. Making a girl obsessed with MC is fine, but don't make it her entire personality at that point it's not a character but a single celled organism with only one function programmed in it.

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Terra_Chad
Terra_Chad

well I kind a like this plot . I just need more frequent updates .

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Moder_Gamer
Moder_Gamer

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