Bloody Adventures

I shall give you 5 stars as you are a beginner... It wasn't bad, but the story lacks the hook for now. Also the sentences are a bit too flowery. Just reduce the flowery-ness, some places it feels forced. Let the writing be natural.

So far it seems really good, I can see that this is motivated from another series and I really like it. A few errors with writing but not a lot so it's still an easy read. Not too much explanation on how characters look but the writing on how the setting looks is really good. Overall 4 stars so far. I do recommend reading.

The story starts out alright but picks itself up more seriously around the 3rd chapter. As for how well, I'll say it's good, and I hope it gets better along. (I wrote this during it's beginning arc)

The novel starts out very similar to other popular webnovels which I didn't like in the beginning, though since this isn't something exclusive to this novel and I've seen it done before in the likes of tbate or authors pov for example. I trusted the process and continued reading in hopes of it creating it's own distinct identity which I think the novel is doing currently. anyhow, since this is just the beginning I can't speak of the future but if the author gets creative with his future arcs I believe the journey of arthur can be an interesting read with some potential. give it a try and see how your enjoying the story for yourself. you might just like it.