Maximus Ashborn, scion of the Most Ancient and Most Noble House of Ashborn, was born to wield magic that bends fire to his will and scorches the very air. Yet, beneath the grandeur of his lineage lies a prisoner’s heart, chained by duty, tradition, and a wizarding world that demands obedience. Hogwarts bows to his name, but its walls smother his soul.
The Ministry watches, Voldemort schemes, and even his own blood binds him to a fate he despises. With every ember he conjures, Maximus burns for freedom—freedom from prophecy, from legacy, from all who dare cage him. To claim it, he’ll ignite a revolution, turning foes to ash. In a world of wands, he is the wildfire.
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very good premise thoroughly enjoyed this story cannot wait for more
The story idea is great, and the character development is well done. I appreciate that the main character isn’t overpowered from the start, and their growth feels natural. While the interactions between the main character and others can feel a bit off at times, they’re still enjoyable overall. My biggest issue is the slow update rate. If possible, I’d love to see updates at least once a day or five times a week. Also, it would be great if there was a rule for bonus chapters—maybe one for every 100 power stones or something similar! Looking forward to more updates!
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I like it so far it is really interesting to me I really like that so far there have have been some changes to plot keep up the good work
So far it has been really great can't wait for more chapters.....