Kill The Extra

Being an author on Webnovel, you can't afford not to be shameless. So here I am, reviewing my own novel. Let me answer some questions you might have before diving in: 1. Who is the Main Character? There are technically two, Lucas and Ryker. But the story mainly follows Ryker, our true protagonist. 2. What kind of transmigration story is this? At first glance, it seems like your usual "reader transmigrates into a novel" setup but there's a twist. Here’s the twist, Lucas, a reader, transmigrates into the world of a novel he read. One that was originally from the POV of its protagonist named Arthur. As you'd expect, Lucas, like most readers turned characters he does something stupid despite knowing how the story goes. Typical transmigration stories. Then that version of Lucas’s journey becomes another novel. Ryker was an editor for that novel. Then Ryker is transmigrated into the same world by the author of that second novel. What is the reason behind Ryker's transmigration? Simple, he was given a mission. What is his mission? Protect Lucas because only Lucas can kill the main antagonist. The catch? An "extra" wants to kill Lucas. but who that extra is remains unknown. And in a world filled with countless side characters and Npc's who didn't have any contacting with the novel, so literally anyone could be the one extra. 3. What makes this novel interesting? If you’re tired of the same formula transmigrate, lay low, become OP hero anyway then this one shakes it up. Ryker isn’t the hero of the story. His mission is to make sure the hero survives. He’s not climbing the ranks to save the world for glory. He’s here on assignment. The idea that he has to identify and eliminate a mysterious "extra" among billions creates a constant tension. Anyone could be the threat. I know it might sound confusing at first but I promise I’ve got a lot planned. The world is big, the stakes are high and the drama? Even higher. I will try my best to meet all of your expectations. If you’ve got questions, don’t hesitate to ask. I’ll do my best to answer every single one.

폴른은 매우 열정적인 독자로서 수많은 작품을 읽어왔기 때문에, 글쓰기 스타일, 세계관 구축, 캐릭터 깊이 등 다양한 이야기에서 많은 경험과 지식을 쌓아왔다고 말할 수 있습니다. 따라서 이것은 그의 독창적인 아이디어가 더해진 완벽한 조합에 불과합니다.💛

フォールンは、読者としてたくさんの経験を積んできた友達で、その経験が彼の文章スタイルや、安定した世界観の構築、キャラクターの視点からもはっきりと感じられます✨。 この作品は本当に面白いと自信を持って言えます！僕もいくつかの章をベータリーディングしましたが、ほとんどの部分がしっかりと書かれています✍️。 もちろん、フォールンは僕と同じく新人作家なので、ところどころミスはあるかもしれません。でも、初心者とは思えないくらい、すごく良いフィックだと思います！ ぜひぜひ、読んでみてください！おすすめです！📚✨

“一部绝对的杰作 — 所有读者都必须阅读！” 这部小说堪称非凡之作。从第一页起，它就以引人入胜的叙述和令人难忘的角色牢牢抓住了我的心。作者的文笔既富有诗意又充满力量，将一个既感人至深又发人深省的故事娓娓道来。 小说的世界观构建得极为精妙，每一个场景都描绘得栩栩如生，仿佛跃然纸上。每一章都揭示出新的情节深度，意想不到的转折让人欲罢不能。角色塑造同样出色，他们复杂而真实的情感让人产生深刻共鸣，他们的喜悦、悲伤和成长仿佛成为读者亲身经历的一部分。 真正让这部小说脱颖而出的是它激发情感的能力。它让人忍俊不禁，又令人潸然泪下；它点燃希望，也带来敬畏。书中探讨的主题既深刻又普遍，让人在读完最后一页后依然沉思良久。 无论你喜欢感人至深的戏剧、扣人心弦的冒险，还是充满奇幻色彩的世界，这本书都能满足你的一切期待。它证明了故事的力量，也提醒我们阅读的意义——去体验别样的世界，感受不同的人生，领悟那些隐藏的真理。 我毫不犹豫地向大家推荐这部小说。这是一本能够触动心灵的作品，一本你会想要一读再读的经典之作。 五星好评，强烈推荐！

Reason why you guys and the reason I am recommending it is because the story takes a 4D chess approach to the transmigration genre, throwing the protagonist into a world where, plot twist, the main character of the novel he was reading is also a transmigrator. That’s right, it’s transmigration inside transmigration. It’s like a Russian nesting doll of isekai madness. Instead of just worrying about sticking to the script, our MC now has to deal with another guy who also read the novel and is out here making moves. The result? Pure chaos. Will they team up? Will they fight? Will they just sit in a tavern, questioning their existence? Who knows? Unlike the usual OP protagonists who get cheat skills and bulldoze their way through the plot like a Dark Souls player on NG+99, this MC actually has to use his brain. Shocking, right? Every choice he makes could lead to disaster, and he can’t just power through with some legendary sword he picked up in a cave. Instead, he’s playing a mental gymnastics tournament, trying to outthink not just the world but another transmigrator who probably also thinks he’s the main character. Talk about main character syndrome. The writing pulls you into the protagonist’s existential crisis, because let’s be real, waking up as an extra in a world where the MC is also a transmigrator is like realizing your isekai fantasy has an unpaid debt attached to it. The story delivers tension, strategy, and just enough existential dread to make you question your own choices in life. With only 17 chapters, there’s no unnecessary filler, just straight-up survival, mind games, and plot twists that’ll make you go, "Wait, what just happened?" If you like transmigration stories with a big brain twist, this one’s a must-read.

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ストーリーは良い方向に向かっているようで、私はこれに大きな期待を抱いているので、今のところは満点をつけたいと思います。

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A Genuinely Great Novel – Worth a Try! If you're reading this review, I highly recommend giving this novel a chance. Read at least 10 to 20 chapters to form your own opinion. Even if it doesn’t end up being your cup of tea, you won’t feel like you wasted your time. Personally, I’ve really enjoyed it so far and would highly recommend it to others. Writing Quality: The writing is simply great. I can't recall noticing any major mistakes, making for a smooth and immersive reading experience. Update Stability: It's still early to judge, but so far, the updates have been consistent. Hopefully, this continues! World-Building: The world-building is solid. It develops naturally as the story progresses, and the information is revealed at a good pace, keeping readers engaged. Story: While it's still too early to give a definitive judgment, the plot has been enjoyable so far and shows great potential. Characters: The characters are well-written and engaging, adding depth to the story. Their interactions feel natural, making them easy to connect with. Overall, this novel is definitely worth a read. If you're considering it, give it a try—you might end up loving it!