The Last Disciple of Elyndra
In a world where six once-allied nations now stand divided, the kingdom of Myralis, a symbol of self-sacrifice, has fallen into oblivion. Centuries after its mysterious downfall, Caelum, the last disciple of a forgotten deity, embarks on a perilous journey to restore his nation's honor.
Guided by the enigmatic teachings of his vanished mentor and armed with the legendary Seal of Abnegation, Caelum must navigate treacherous politics and face champions from rival kingdoms in a deadly tournament that will decide the fate of the world.
As ancient secrets resurface and alliances crumble, Caelum discovers that every truth hides a lie and every ally could become an enemy. His quest could either unite the Six Nations—or precipitate their destruction.
Will he master his heritage and fulfill the prophecy that marks him as Myralis’s savior, or will his choices doom the world to chaos?
that was a great start and I like the part where the girl with the white hair appears and the beginning part where you explain the scene I like reading this ready and I like the detailing you gave i will read until the end thank you for the chapter author
Very interesting novel, I love how you started the opening and setting up all the nations, writing style is very promising. only a little more improvement in explaining timings would make this near perfect
I really love the world building and character distinction in this novel, a must read for everyone 🥰🥰
This novel easily has some of the most beautiful world building I have ever seen. It’s rich with lore and the characters are well written with their own personalities that feels real. If you love fantasy, you’re sure to love this book!
This novel is incredible! The world-building pulls you in completely, the characters’ emotions feel so real, and the dialogue flows naturally. The detailed descriptions make it easy to picture every scene, and you can really feel Calum’s pain and unbreakable determination. I can’t recommend this enough—it’s a must-read!
A compelling novel with a strong opening and well-crafted worldbuilding. The writing shows great promise, but clearer time transitions would enhance the flow and cohesion. With slight refinement, it could reach near perfection.
The novel overall is amazing . Great worldbuilding and depth. Great work!!
I absolutely love the world-building, the depth of the characters, the perfect pacing, and the engaging dialogue—it all weaves together into an unforgettable experience!
A fallen nation, an oracle with a vision that comes too late, and a child who remains the people's only hope of rising again. It is interesting that Caelum appears to be aware of what awaits him, but like any young man, he needs the guidance of a parent figure as well as the assistance of those around him.
A real book with a real plot line. I think this is a good novel to catch on with. In this sense, I highly recommend this book to viewers and readers of webnovels .
This novel is very unique in its premise and to be honest the synopsis attracted me as it gave true fantasy vibes like got or lotr. I highly recommend it to everyone to try it.
The book is nicely done with good world building i really liked it
The world building is top notch. I LOVE IT The story also has a perfect pace but could you maybe use simpler grammar to make it more reader friendly
Myalis is an incredible high fantasy epic! The way you blend political intrigue, deep world-building, and intense action is truly captivating. Caelum’s journey to restore his fallen kingdom’s honor is both thrilling and emotionally complex, especially with the deadly tournament and shifting alliances. The relationships between the six divided nations are so well-crafted, and every twist kept me on the edge of my seat. As a reader, I was hooked from start to finish. Your ability to weave suspense and moral complexity into every character’s story is fantastic. Fans of intricate politics and high-stakes adventure will definitely love this. Can't wait to see what comes next!
Just the start of the novel tells a lot about human nature and indifference. I'm very interested to experience how far it goes and where it ends. Nice book author. Everything is so on point. No spelling error, beautiful descriptions and well developed characters👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌