SimpleExaggeration

An ordinary man who on the way home after work finds himself in another world! Amazing wonders high and low! Even scenery so beautiful and desolate, humankind will never find them dull. However, there lay terrors lurking within these wonders. And so, how would an ordinary man survive this world? 
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Please tell me, I’m not sure how I even got here! SOS!

Disclaimer - My first work, first time trying, and I sure as heck don't know much about all. Please criticize so I know how to be better.

Imaginative Normality

I can literally hear the foreboding music right now… Like I'm about to encounter a really dangerous situation. Or in gamer's terms, stumbling onto a boss battle.

Whoosh OM OM OM OM OM Why am I eating right now? I'M STRESS EATING! I'm falling into the mist, it is getting darker with the setting sun, and I'm falling so slowly and suspensefully!

THIS IS CREATING AN ATMOSPHERE FOR A UPCOMING STORM! THE LITERAL DEFINITION OF THE CALM BEFORE THE STORM.

HUFF PUFF HUFF puff huff puff…Whew That's better…Huff? Now that's weird? Why are my lungs so strong now? I'm inhaling the dandelion seeds without coughing at all.

Huff You see that? Am I eating the seeds or are they going to my lungs? Either way, it's pretty good for me. Though this is a strange feeling.

It's like an unlimited cycle of me eating the dandelions, before getting burned up due to my Rejuvenation. Whoosh

Feels like drinking water on an empty stomach, just that the feeling is so unnatural. But as I'm eating, WHOOSH I see an island pass by me.

Woah! That was close! ...…..Wait buddy! Turn around! We need land! Whoosh Ah screw it, at least we got ground to land on if I were to fall.

Lucky me, I still have a chance…WHOOSH… Are the dandelions making me see things? Why did the island passing by seem tilted?

WHOOSH WOAH! And why are the islands so close to each other now?! WHOOSH SCHLICK! AUGG! Ouch…I got scraped by a rock or something.

Oh crap…Are the islands exploding again! That was to the left of me, so looks like I gotta use some of my extreme dodgeball skills.

WHOOSH Hah, too slow, pull-up escape! HUP! THUMP! UUUGG! Cough COUgh HYUFF HAAA HUFF RIGHT TO MY STOMACH!

What the hell!? Why is the rock's path so straight!?! It didn't seem like a rock being launched at all! It was slow! How was its path so straight!

CRUMBLE *FALL* That sounds like the noise of the islands shaking off its part?! So are the rocks being launched!? BOOM! WHOOSH

..........A piece of an island just dropped behind me…DROPPED…I AM SEEING AN ISLAND BREAKING APART IN FRONT OF ME.

WHY IS IT SURPRISING?! YOU MAY ASK?! WELL…IT'S THE FACT THAT I'M CURRENTLY SEEING THE ISLAND'S UNDERSIDE! AS IF I'M IN ANOTHER GRAVITY FIELD!

40 - Between The Calm And The Storm