The New Lincoln Loud
Author: nerghomek
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a soul transmigrates to Lincoln loud's body who had just died, now he will try to fulfill his and Lincoln's dream and try to give a good life to his new family. (this is completely AU and i will not include any plot from the original series, i will only use the characters, i will try not to use any of the chapters from the original series).
pd: I am not good at English and this is a way to practice it if you find bad spelling do not hesitate to tell me.
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keep up the good work, let there be development, etc. No need to rush. But since this is a harem, we are waiting for the corresponding chapters))) Oh and also since this is a cartoon in an ordinary world, I suggest crossovers with ordinary worlds from Nickelodeon such as iCarly, Big Time Rush (you wrote about the songs yourself, then there is an opportunity with group songs), and also if Lincoln goes into acting, I suggest a crossover with the cartoon series Victoria the Victorious.
This novel look awesome, I hope you continue to writing this novel. .........................................................................
I haven’t read it yet, but I like the title. Please don’t give up, author!…………………….…………………….. ………..…………..…………….……………….…………………….……………………..………..………..…………….………………..………………….……………………..………..…………..………….………………..
The story is getting really good, all the parts are well done, the way the conversation is conducted and the writing is amazing, and what is the name of the song that Lincoln is using in chapter 5?
amazing story , I would recommend for people who want a good loud house story this one is amazing .
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This is actually just good the grammer messes up he/she’s some times but besides that it’s a good story
This story is very wonderful. At the end of every chapter l am excited for the next chapter. I want to ask the hero. He only uses a guitar or will he use different musical instruments. This story l recommend to everyone who loves the Loud House series.
Updating stability is wonderful, it's a loud house fanatic so pretty original and I like the concept....however there's a lot of problems with it, first of all I suggest downloading a grammar app like grammarly because your novels in desperate need of that. I'd also recommend you learn a bit more about proper sentence structuring, and paragraphing, and proper separating when your doing a comment. Your fic also randomly pops into another language or has repeating sentences, finally it's monotonous and repetitive as hell but that can be overlooked, do this and the writing quality goes from 2 stars to prolly 3.5 or something. Chapter length is average so can't say anything in regards of that. There's also only like 12 chaps so it'll be hard to world build(and considering it's a fanfic meaning world building is already done, the story gets a pass on that end, character design is better than some of the fics I've seen on this site but that's not saying much as it's still pretty ass. I mean the character design isn't even bare bones, it's basically non-existent...Most of the chapters is wasted on pointless little things and little development, the system skills are inconsistent. For reference, his math skill is at 17 meaning a 17% boost yet its stated it gives a 4* boost to his skills, the rewards of Stat points are weird too, one moment he's not getting much out of it and the next he gains SEVERAL kg worth of muscle mass, and finally this is a bit biased but for me personally, the dramatic shift and grab for music is pretty off-putting, not that's its that badly written but I just hate lyrics being put in chapters if there not well written and sad to say but it's not well written. That's the review and if you did read this entire thing then also know, I really loved the wholesomeness of his dad and this was written by phone at 2 am so forgive me if there's an error or two