Chapter three: Abandoned

"Hey Kalino, Ganix, it looks like we won't be staying here any longer," Shinzu said with a happy expression on his face. Kalino asked, "Why, big brother?"

Shinzu replied, "Because Father is coming for us tomorrow."

Suddenly, Ganix began to laugh. Shinzu asked, "Ganix, what's so funny?"

Ganix responded, "The father who abandoned us is coming to save us? How heroic of him. He left us when we needed him the most. When will reality hit you hard enough, Shinzu? You're so desperate for a father that your eyes aren't even open yet. You're still acting like a child. He was a man of abuse—have you forgotten, Shinzu? We were nothing but tools to him. And when he was done with us, he threw us out like dogs. Mother tried, but she was just another victim of his abuse. Even though we were born, do you really think that was love? He hated us. The only reason we exist is because he wanted to get that feeling off his chest. We are nothing more than the spawn of hatred."

Shinzu responded, "This letter proves it! Father has not forgotten us because he loves us. Just watch!"

Ganix scoffed, "Fine, but I hope he doesn't show up—just like always. Who needs him anyway?" He then left the playground and walked into the house.

"Shinori, is it true that Shinzu and the others are leaving tomorrow?" Miya asked.

"Yes, and it's so sudden. I wish we'd never gone to his house," Shinori replied.

"Don't say that. I can tell you really like him. You should support his decision," Miya said.

Shinori asked, "Even though I might never see him again?"

Miya replied, "Then spend as much time with him as you can."

Shinori began searching for Shinzu. "Shinzu, there you are. What are you doing?"

Shinzu replied, "Huh? Nothing, really."

Shinori said, "Then why are you acting so weird? Come on, let me see what you're hiding."

Shinori grabbed Shinzu from behind, and they both fell to the ground. As Shinori raised her head, she saw a group of puppies barking at her.

"Shinori, get off me! They think you're attacking me, and it's getting them upset," Shinzu said.

"Shinzu, you know they're not supposed to be here, right?" Shinori asked.

"Yeah, I know, but I couldn't help it. Please don't tell Miss Inko," Shinzu pleaded.

"Sure, this will be our secret. But once you leave, you won't be able to take care of them," Shinori replied.

"I know, but I'll visit every weekend if I have to. I'll ask Father for that much because I really enjoyed my time here with you and the others," Shinzu said.

Shinori's face turned red. "So where is their mother?" she asked.

"I don't know. I haven't seen her since I came here," Shinzu replied.

Suddenly, they heard a loud bark. They ran toward the sound and found Ganix throwing stones at a dog.

"Ganix, stop! You're hurting her," Shinzu yelled.

"This dog attacked me first. I'm just defending myself," Ganix replied.

"Fine, just stop now," Shinzu pleaded.

"Then make me," Ganix challenged.

Shinzu rushed at Ganix and grabbed him. Ganix struck Shinzu with a series of punches. Shinzu tried to block them but was still hit. Refusing to hit back, Shinzu endured the blows.

"You're just as weak as this dog and her," Ganix taunted.

"Ganix, don't say it," Shinzu warned.

Ganix smirked. "Just like Mother. She didn't have the strength to fight back when she needed to. Her kindness was her weakness, just like yours. She didn't fight for herself, and in the end, she didn't have the strength to live. That's why she was so weak, and I hated that about her."

Enraged, Shinzu swung at Ganix, who grabbed his hand and pushed him to the ground.

"You see? Just as weak. This fight is over," Ganix said as he walked away.

Shinori helped Shinzu up. "Are you okay?" she asked.

"He's right. I'm so weak. I can't even stop my brother from doing something wrong," Shinzu said, beginning to cry.

"No, that's not true. Your kindness is your strength. You didn't fight back because you didn't want to hurt your brother. You're not weak, Shinzu—you're strong. So please, don't cry," Shinori said.

"You're right. Let's go," Shinzu said, wiping his tears.

When they returned, Miss Inko noticed Shinzu's bruises. "Shinzu, what happened? You're all bruised up," she asked.

"It's nothing. Ganix and I just had a little argument. I'm fine," Shinzu replied.

Later that night, as Shinzu lay in bed, he thought to himself, It's been a long time since I saw Father. I'm so excited—I can't wait.

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"Why can't that kid just behave?" Shinzu asked.

"I'm sure he's just a little troubled, but he'll come around," Miss Inko replied.

"I hope so," she added.

Later that night, after taking a shower, Shinzu thought to himself, It's been such a long time since I last saw my father. I'm so hyped—I just can't wait.

The next morning, Shinzu was woken up by Miss Inko.

"Shinzu, wake up. Uhmm, Shinzu, wake up!"

He rubbed his eyes and groggily responded, "Morning, Miss Inko. What's up?"

"I'm sorry, Shinzu, but could you go with Shinori to the convenience store again? I forgot to buy something."

"Sure," Shinzu replied.

A few minutes later, Shinori called out, "Shinzu, you ready?"

"Yeah, let's go," Shinzu said as they both headed to the store.

On the way, Shinori said with a somber expression, "I guess this is your last day with us."

Shinzu nodded but reassured her, "Yes, but I'll visit. I promise I'll see you again."

"You promise?" Shinori asked.

"Yeah, I promise. Now, let's head back," Shinzu said as they finished their errand and returned to the orphanage.

As they walked back, a vehicle stopped nearby. A man, his wife, and their child stepped out.

"Wow, Father, this place is so cool! So this is Japan? Wow!" the child exclaimed.

"Honey, which restaurant are we going to?" asked the woman.

"It's just down this road," the man replied.

Shinzu froze. He recognized the voice of the man. Turning his head, he whispered, "Father…"

The family walked happily down the street, oblivious to Shinzu, who began to cry. He ran back to the orphanage, but he tripped over a stone, collapsing and hitting his head. As he blacked out, his thoughts spiraled.

I was a fool to think we could be a family again. I thought if Father came back, we'd have a strong bond like we did with Mother. But I was wrong. I thought family bonds were the strongest, but I was wrong. I know two wrongs don't make a right, so why… why can't we just be a happy family?

A voice echoed in his mind.

Yes, two wrongs don't make a right. But like positive and negative energy, a positive and negative make a negative. A positive and positive make a positive. And negative and negative… make a positive. You've been making positive decisions to try to do the right thing. But have you ever considered making negative decisions to achieve the right outcome? In the end, positivity isn't always the right choice. So, what is your choice?

Shinzu answered the voice, I'll create my own family, one where we're happier than anyone!

The voice replied, Just don't lose your way.

Shinzu responded firmly, I won't. This world is cursed with loneliness.

When Shinzu regained consciousness, Shinori ran up to him. "Shinzu, are you okay?" he asked with concern.

"I'm fine," Shinzu replied, though his voice was hollow and lifeless. Shinori stared at him, sensing something was wrong. Why does Shinzu sound like that? And his eyes… it's like the light is trying to enter but darkness swallows it whole.

They returned to the orphanage and heard a dog barking. Rushing outside, they saw Ganix throwing stones at a young puppy while the mother dog watched in fear.

"Ganix! I told you to stop that!" Shinzu shouted.

Ganix smirked and retorted, "Like I'd take orders from someone weaker than me. You better try being a pizza delivery guy—at least they know how to take orders."

Shinzu replied calmly, "Ganix, why does a king rule? Why does a king give orders? It's because he's the most dominant one. Are you saying you're more dominant than me? Prove it."

Ganix grinned. "Fine. Let's see if you can mop the floor with me this time."

Ganix charged at Shinzu, throwing a right punch. Shinzu caught his fist and countered with a left swing. The two exchanged blows, seemingly evenly matched, until Shinzu kicked Ganix's leg, throwing him off balance. Shinzu slammed him to the ground and delivered a flurry of punches until Ganix stopped struggling.

Ganix lay on the ground, sprawled out. "Maybe I should start listening to him sometimes. I didn't think he'd have the guts to fight me, but… what's with the sudden change? And his voice—it's different. Whatever," Ganix muttered before getting up and heading back inside.

Miss Inko saw him and gasped. "Ganix, what happened? You're all beaten up!"

Before Ganix could answer, Shinzu

Before Ganix could respond, Shinzu stepped in.

"He tripped and fell. I asked if he wanted help, but he refused," Shinzu said smoothly.

Miss Inko looked at Ganix. "Is that true?"

Ganix hesitated, confused by Shinzu's lie. "Uh… yeah, I tripped. But I'm okay."

"That's good to hear," Miss Inko said, relieved.

Suddenly, there was a knock at the front door.